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by mavencree

schedule August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can i just say this is the most unique fic i've read to date. At least you didn't over exagerate with the hate and there is some hope with Harry reuniting with friends. Will Dumbledore ever awaken? You said he wouldn't but i have a feeling, or hope, that he will. Remus is at least the most wonderful man and everyone should listen to him.

So harry will have to learn how to use a staff? you'll be the second author to write such a thing, to my knowledge, and have kept my attention. At least you didn't rush into the relationship right on.

If it's any connsolation, keep up the good work and dont sweat the dumb ppl who are threatening you to rush the next chapter. You were right in the previous chapter about real life keeping one busy and such. *sigh* that's enough for now, can't wait for the next chapter, bye.

cya
Dahlias
^_^.
person spaz
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes I am very much injoying this story very much. its been along time since your last update, I almost forgot how good it was. I would very much love to read more please. So if you could update when ever RL slows down to a crawl :) it would be greatly loved. Life is always a bitch. keep up the good work.
person LInis
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Please write more.... i love i love...


okay slightly more calm now... this is a brill fic and I can't wait to see how things turn out.

LINIS
person Emma
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi i love this story, are you going to go into the detail of harrys training with the staff, i love snape/harry fics especially when the two have to work together, will snape be training harr jur just give him the books?, i love the detail you seam to have covered almost every angle of this story so far, i hope albus awakes, i'd love to see how he sees harry now. and how will the others respond! though i hope you leave this for a while this story has the patential to be a absolutly lovely novell, and i hope you don't disapoint me by cutting it short.
all round lovely story, i like liam and the way you interduced the fact that harrys gay into the story made me laugh, i hope your muse is still with you and that any writers block goblins have been vanquished from your home for the forceable future as I am looking forward to reading this next chapter of this story soon.
Yours Emma
person Jaimi
schedule August 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok lo e the story it is really great. but one request. please don\'t use the term warlock. it doesn\'t really mean male witch it means truth twister and those of us in the wiccan life find it pretty offensive. really there is no difference in term for the word witch, it is uniin min meaning. but wizzard tends to be acceptable for gender specifying. really i don\'t mean to nag about this i do love your story and can\'t wait to read more but this just happened to be under my list of pet peeves.
really though your characters are very vivid and the way you described harry\'s change in appearance wel well crafted. ok thank you for reading and i hope you don\'t consider this a flame cause it isn\'tone really.
person Runny Ink
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story! Looking forward to more chapters, but I see you\'re in the same RL boat as most of us when it comes to updating. Good luck in your writing, the story is going great so far!
person anonymousghost
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story! I just couldn\'t stop reading it! Keep up the good work and keep releasing out those chapters!
person crudedly
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
like it. Are we getting to the romance yet?
person uris
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is great. Keep going. If you have other stories, I would love to read them.
person EnReader
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I ran across this story at least three times last year, bit it was always an unfinished, two-chaptered story.
It would be very, very interesting for a chance to read the whole story, not only the first two chapters. It\'s highly annoying, believe me. Do you plan to write it this time, or this is an another tease - because it can be a great story, but uploading an unfinished story from time to time is not ethical toward your readers.
Well, that\'s all for now. I promise to review if I read a previously unknown chapter, okay? But until now - I will just fume in silence.
EnReader