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by Avrild

person NegativeNine
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah! I just found this one! excellent, another April Grey story!
person elleocution
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AprilGrey,ase ase write more! Interesting beginning, and I love the promise of angst here. I\'d love to see what you have in store, especially if those four are looking for desire and to be needed--but can\'t quite determine who can provide what to whom. ANY pairing of those four will be delicious.
person Katta
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Areyou kidding? Of course we want more!
person spaz141
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Thanks.
person bansidh
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very promising start to what should prove to be a great story. I love the word \'edifice\'! I really look forward to seeing more of this story.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here\'s my review because I WANT MORE!!!

I really thought that it was Severus that saved Hermione... goes to show how much Severus & Remus are alike!!!

I must admit that I am hoping for SS/HG & RL/NT, but I think it will be good no matter which way it goes!!!

I am sadly looking to find out who the casualties are for the Order:(

Til chapter 2, Deb >^..^<
person GeekGoddess
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning....I am way interested....please continue.....I kind of thought you were writing a 2 couples that swap.....and actually are more of a square than a couple....I am interested to see what happens.
person GeekGoddess
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to say.....am hoping for a (Hermione and SNape), and (Remus and Tonks).
person Seshat
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting so far, I\'d like to read more.
person Andrian
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful angst my dear, loved every moment of it. And you know my feelings. Remus is my love and hopefully Hermiones