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for Shattered

by Adriana

person spaz141
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pretty cool, I look forward to the next chapter. thanks.
person deblovesdragon
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. Breathlessly anticipating the next one. Just love Severus, you know.
So, Draco and Ginny, huh? I always liked them paired up. Harry is an idiot. Really dumb guy.
Keep writing. Love it.
person IrishRavenX
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Draco, Draco...invisibility cloaks only do you so much good at Hogwarts, I guess. More story soon?
person Ireth
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco... It\'s times like these that I wish I could give the little bastard a hug! And Severus, too. And Hermione.
person spaz141
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was kinda scarey at the end. Thanks.
person spaz141
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just beautifully written, I want to cry. Thanks.
person Snapeaholic
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love how the story is spinning out. Keep up the good work! I\'m looking forward to seeing where this thread leads!
person Ireth
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
[For the first time since his childhood, he wept. He wept for all the things he wanted, but could never have.]

*cries* Poor Severus! This is so unfair on both of them :( But for him to have finally found love and then to have it taken away and not knowing if he\'ll ever see Hermione again... It\'s just terrible!
person Temptation
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just got caught up with this one and just had to give you a big hello & WAY TO GO! It\'s balanced with angst and humor. Draco is definetly the dry-wit. Loved the line \"It\ot eot easy being green\" (reminded me of Kermit the Frog from the Muppets Movie I sat through when my son was little - yeah we even own the video). I really liked Draco getting the \"upper hand\" on Daddy Dearest for once. (I have a love/hate thing for Lucius - right now its the hate side for the nasty little git).
Please don\'t keep us in suspense to much longer - send us an update soon please (insert begging and groveling here).
person Lena
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, La Femme Nikita... I LOVED that show before they cancelled it! (boooo!)Peta Wilson was so cool! Good chapter, please update soon! I want to see how far Draco takes his little \"plan\" to save his own ass!