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for Shattered

by Adriana

person Snapeaholic
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! Very cool, and the descriptions of Belize were fantastic. I really could picture it well in my mind. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful story. Update soon!!
person Snapeaholic
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say - WOW!!! Really a great story so far. Draco is such an arrogant prick, and Severus....oooohhh...Severus... Mmmm... Anyway, please update soon! I\'m enjoying this immensely!!!
person Anya
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! you\'re posting it again!!! yes!!! I loved your story when I read it on WHISPERS and actually had to re-read it (I saved it on my computer) as I\'m a bit impatient to wait till you post it all here!=) you said you\'re going to make some changes? I wonder if there\'ll be many of them! Are you going to change the plot somewhat? I hope not much... I guess I\'ll have to re-read it again, the new and improved version...not that I mind;)))

Keep updating! you know we love your story!!!
person spaz141
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Thanks.
person XxphoenixX
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is fascinating. Fantastic, really. Very creative. Poor Poppy! We all loved the stern old dear. I love the Sentient idea, and the phoenix is a beautiful symbol for it. The shattering bit is also extremely interesting. Draco\'s slight OOC-ness is an understandable change, although an affectionate (even if it\'s only friendly) Snape seems a bit quick, but then again, with the tragedy, maybe it\'s to be expected. Sirius is such a horny old dog. I love Harry in this; he\'s still amiable and laughing, despite the horrors of the world, and it\'s very refreshing that he\'s not in some deep state of angst. I really love where you\'re taking this fic, and I hope you update soon!
person Aoibheann
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent. You should be proud of your work! Looking forward to reading more of this well written fic.
person deblovesdragon
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good fic!
Aw, Madam Pomfrey died. That is so sad. Hum, I wonder who her replacement will be? (wink)
Since the whole story is written, I hope you will post more soon.
person mother
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I remember this well. I read it first on fanfiction.net and really enjoyed it. Am really looking forward to the rest of the new, improved version. Keep up the good work.
person spaz141
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* painfully beautiful. Thanks.