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for Shattered

by Adriana

person Avosa
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its so cool you put belieze in this story! i've actually been there! (it was the first time i'd ever left the United States) Very beautiful. I hope hermione is ok.
person Avosa
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say i'm very excited about this story. I'm a nursing stuent and was always sad by how little attention the main characters paid to learning healing spells...seems very practical to me... Can't wait to keep reading!
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person TNgirl
schedule February 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! You did an excellent job!! I can\'t wait to read the sequel!
person little_rose
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can i just ask- are you from Seattle? Cuz the only other pizza place i know, called Guido\'s is in Seattle- one\'s near greenlake where i used to go all the time when i lived there, and there was another one as well...They did thst pst pizza- the traditional way!:)
Sorry if you havent actually got aclue what im on about- that part of the story really reacehed out to me, as i grew up in Seattle and loved it. I now live in England- where it rains the majority of the time (dont believe those myths abt seattle rain!), and ppl are constantly grumpy!
We all have our crosses to bear;)
Love your story by the way- im liking the phoenittoottoo and looking forward to learning more abt hermione and her \'sentientism\'...!
Roisin xx
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say, bravo! I am absolutly in love with your writting. Being an avid Snape/Granger \'shipper, this story, simply put, took my very breath away.
person PaganPoetry
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is a mean mean place to leave it! My heart\'s been in my throat for a good part of this story and now I have to put up with waiting for a sequel! *Crosses fingers* Soon please? Wonderful story by the way, I love it!
person spaz141
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was fun, thanks.
person Snapeaholic
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I\'m definitely looking forward to the sequel!