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for Forever

by Ashley41430

person Xtreme17nc13
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::grabs tissue:: That was so beautiful. It has me in tears at the end, but it just sounded so troubled, so beautiful, so perfect. You are a talented writer and you should write some more. I know that I would enjoy it completely. Wonderful job. Toodlez! --Ashlee
person BlackCat9
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy fuck how does my stupid fic with no description and nothing really interesting happening have more reviews than this piece of gold?...Maybe it\'s because your sumary of it kind of sucked. :P I was expecting something trivial and just smutty but this was filled with emtion and meaning and wow, fabulous sex yes, but that was almost a secondary thing, the feelings were taking such precendent (which I love) So slap a better description on this sucker!
Great job, I absolutely loved it and if I knew how to make it a favorite story on my account I would. :p

-BlackCat9
person seraphina (sarah)
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this so much and yet I didnt. This fic connected with something deep inside of my and broke my heart. You did a very good job on making the emotions feel real and relevant with out feeling fluffy And I appreciate that being the angst whore that I am. By the way good sex scene very sensual.
person trulymad
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was literally breathless when I read this! so angsty and smutty at the same time! LOVE it ;P