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by LaLeLu2007

person saff
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I did read the story and I absolutly love it are you gonna update soon I hope so you wouldn\'t whant to make a girl cry would yah:( wahhhhhh:(
person Sky
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still no update?! Awh, man!
person DJay
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m very intreged by this story, and I would love to read more. I can Beta the english version for you if you like.
person Mira
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey du!

Ich hab die Geschichte schon in Deutsch auf ffnet gelesen und bin zwiegespalten!
1. Die Geschichte ist ausserordentlich gut und sehr beeindruckend, was mich automatisch zu 2. bringt:
2. Die Story ist absolut verst
person helice
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A great start! A different premise, I like how Snape is looking at both dark & light, appears to like and want Harry, just figures he has been kept ignorant of much, and untrained. I think it is good that he is Not really on Voldie\'s side, neither agrees with \'dark\' nor \'light\' extreme---so may be working to overthrow him in time, with others, is my guess? Andis looking at a long-term change in the wizarding world for the better. But why eliminate Dumbledore first, instead of Voldie first, or was just a casualty of who was in the winning position at the time? Looking forward to more.
person ALYM
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY IF YOU DONT PUT HERE THE COMPLETE STORY SEND TO ME. PLEASE
person Kateri
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved this, I am very eager for more
person Sky
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am definitely interested in more.
person Blackrose
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like a great story. Is it gonna be a Snape/Harry fic? Is Harry gonna turn dark? If you still need a beta, I would gladly be your beta. Just send me an e-mail to above address and I\'ll get back to you. I would very mucke tke to see more of this story.
person T-chan
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just wanted to let you know how much I liked this first chapter. I loved the idea of these in between spaces of grey. It is an accurate impression of how I imagine Snape is, constantly choosing between total light and total darkness. I daresay Harry is in for one big suprise when things become clearer. Please, continue posting more of your story. I\'m certainly intrigued as to what will happen next. Cheers, T-chan.