AFF Fiction Portal
schedule October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Luna is a blond not a brunette, you have it right in one place but wrong in others
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its a good story licely long and sustained,

however, virginal is not a word, it would just be virgin any place you whould use that word:

for example when you said "her previously virginal uterus"
it sould just be "her previously virgin uterus"

I hope I helped'

~~ _/) ~~ blaze ~~ _/) ~~
person gamer
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is very well written defenitly 10 out of 10 materiel its fics like this that show what aff.net truely is. BRING ON THE SMUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person vgss
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you get a cookie!

Seriously, that\'s the whole *point* of fan fiction -- to take a point in the story and send it off on a different direction. If I wanted to write a story that was all truth, I would just copy and paste from the ebook!
person Anon
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Umbridge never got into Dumbledore\'s office, it sealed itself off so she couldnt get in
person Shampoo
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?! Okay, I kid. REALLY hot fic. Twisted but hot.
person Noone59
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, MY GOD, hetro, EVIL, you devil-worshipping whore!!! AHHHHHHHH

LOL WE both really have way to much time on my hand.