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August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far I like it. I'm very curious to see if Harry does end up forgiving his "friends". Looking forward to updates.
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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like a lot, very intruiging, can't wait for more!!!
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August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story so far cannot wait to the new chapter comes up
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice!
I like the little sadistic part of Harry in this. Keep writing please.
I like the little sadistic part of Harry in this. Keep writing please.
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August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... don\'t think i could come up with any suggestions... you could have harry play act like he\'s so very greatfull whilst all the while plotting to destroy all those who hurt him...sirius included.
Whatever yo jus just keep writting this is brill.
LINIS
Whatever yo jus just keep writting this is brill.
LINIS
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I hope to see more of it, and soon.
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, it might work, your characterisations work alittle. However, it is an impossiblity that he will ever have a relationship with any of the people that betrayed him, so unless you remove believible human emotions from your story. At most, its \'I forgive you, never speak to me again.\' Anything beyond that is unreasonable.
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK????.... Does Harry turn into the next dark lord? Good start but 12 years? KEep it going i want to see what happens.
GOOD LUCK!!!!
GOOD LUCK!!!!
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February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was great! who is the slash couple? Oh how i hope it is Severus and Harry. I do love them together. great story can\'t wait to read more on it.
Miki
Miki