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So much pain! Hard to read.

Awww that was so sad! Poor Draco! And I like the lyrics to that song. How much did you change them? Not much? I want that song. *goes and searches for song*

5 out of 5!

Words fail me...I\'ve never flamed or said horrible things about a fanfic before but what exactly is the point of this one? I was badly sexually abused by a member of my family through my whole childhood and I just found that sick and disturbing. Nearly all your fics are about rape and incest. I don\'t mind some incest, I love slash and I\'m always willing to read different things but that fic just wasn\'t...I don\'t know it\'s hard to describe how it made me feel. How can you write such things?

I cry for little Draco. I really like the evil you imprinted on Lucious. But here are some little tips off the top of my head. (Don\'t think me up in myself or anything. They are just thoughts. . .) If you were writing this for sad purposes, I think you should work on tramatizing Draco\'s mind a little more. If you were writing this for kink, you need to work on the sex parts. Show more action of what the child and his mother are being put through.

that is so sad! but it is beautifully written!

Wuow...
Really..smilsmile*

Hugs
Mya

Excelent very very good write mor stories please this one was very good almost like something i would write. i think you would like my story On time more i reccomend you read it lol well lots of love Erebus387