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Hey, I just read youre story and I really like it so far. Though it started really creepy and was a very little bit too much travelling around in the middle it is very well written. But I guess that will change now and all was the silence before the storm. I really await the reason, why Dumbledore felt to hide that much.
Keep going, you just found a new reader!

I love your description of everything

Ouch! Embolisms aren\'t fun, I gather...So they are one step closer to Albus, and hopefully further away from Azkaban. I gather there is only so long the Aurorers can stall...

I would like to be added to the update notatioation list...I often miss updates on this site. (And you\'ll get to have a nifty address-name on your list ^_^ )
I can\'t wait to see another chapter! (Well, I can, but it will be done so grudgingly. :P)

Ciao!

Chapter 11... WOW, this is really something!!! I don\'t recall ever reading a story in which anyone hit an apparition barrier, VERY INTERESTING!!! I am always happy to find something new (new to me anyway) or unusual in a story!!!

I feel badly that they all ended up banged up, but at least they all were able to get back to the point where they had started!!!

Now that they have found Nicholas Flamel alive I am hoping that he will lead them to Albus (an alive Albus)!!! I want so much for everything to get taken care of so that Hermione & Severus & take their relationship to the next level!!! I can\'t wait to see what they find out from Nicholas Flamel!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<

This is fabulous. My spirits rise when I see you have updated. Love it.

I like coffee, I like tea, I don\'t get periods since my hysterectomy!


I love the boys\' discomfort -- WUSSIES!!! I\'d imagine as Head of House, Severus has had to deal with his share of hormones, cramps, and feminine supply crises; his reaction was exactly what I\'d expect.

Thank goodness thay at least found Flamel. Okay so now things are picking up. Fingers and toes crossed! Where\'s Dumbledore?

AHHH! EVIL! EVIL! NAKED! NAKED! (it\'s a long story invovling a kid with TS... don\'t ask) I can\'t belive you and your evil evil evil evil (naked) cliffie! I\'m going to go insane. Yes, you updated quickly... but what\'s the point if you\'re going ot leave us with that? GAH! ::takes out sledgehammer:: You see this thing? I\'m not afraid to use itgivegives experimental swing... hits wall, hard:: SEE! NOW GET BACK HERE AND FINISH. Thank you, come again.

Yet another great chapter! I\'m really enjoying the story and can\'t wait to see where it goes.

I am very sorry for taking so long to review. I have been busy and, sadly, was unable to fit in time to review.
For chapter 9, I enjoyed it and thought that it well written.
As for chapter 10, I enjoyed it and the oprobproblems that I could come up with were grammar errors.