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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Albus\'s condition almost made me cry. How heartwrenching to see a man of such power slowly deteriorating like that. Absolutely fantastic story, and I am enjoying every minute. Keep up the good work!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Certainlyhad had the idea to post it up here while I was writing to you, at least until I can find a webhost for my site that I am planning. It\'s hard to find a place that will allow me to post some of the stuff I write. I don\'t want to pay for something only to have them take it down and say I broke their rules and not give me my money back.
http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=21809
Therelotslots more, but I still have to edit it.. ie. copy all the posts from the yahoo group, fix spelling errors and reformat it to post up one here. That\'s alot of work actually, and each chapter is equivalent to a day so I have to watch for the breaks.
http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=21809
Therelotslots more, but I still have to edit it.. ie. copy all the posts from the yahoo group, fix spelling errors and reformat it to post up one here. That\'s alot of work actually, and each chapter is equivalent to a day so I have to watch for the breaks.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to actually review!
That whole chest thing... certainly disturbing, it actually reminds me of \"Guts\" by Chuck Palahniuk... he\'s the guy who wrote \'Fight Club\'... http://www.freewebs.com/reverendbeastly/guts.htm Don\'t read this if you are at all squeamish... it made my stomach churn and I\'ve done disections with no problem.
You will find that alot of things remind me of something else. But then, I guess that\'s a good thing.
Keep up the good work.. you know, how is it that the curse killed Hermoine\'s parents is taking so long on Albus? Because he\'s a wisard or they found something to slow it? Just an idea, like to hear more about it..
That whole chest thing... certainly disturbing, it actually reminds me of \"Guts\" by Chuck Palahniuk... he\'s the guy who wrote \'Fight Club\'... http://www.freewebs.com/reverendbeastly/guts.htm Don\'t read this if you are at all squeamish... it made my stomach churn and I\'ve done disections with no problem.
You will find that alot of things remind me of something else. But then, I guess that\'s a good thing.
Keep up the good work.. you know, how is it that the curse killed Hermoine\'s parents is taking so long on Albus? Because he\'s a wisard or they found something to slow it? Just an idea, like to hear more about it..
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I\'m so glad we finally know what happaned to Dumbledore. I knew he had to have had something big happen for him not to have defended Severus after war.war. I hope they can figure out how to make the new stone before its too late.
You did a great job with Dumbledores ramblings. It was very true to life, people in that state of mind sometimes have a difficult time separating the past from the present and often get them mixed together into one.
Can\'t wait for your next update.
You did a great job with Dumbledores ramblings. It was very true to life, people in that state of mind sometimes have a difficult time separating the past from the present and often get them mixed together into one.
Can\'t wait for your next update.
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Thank you :-)
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12..... POOR Albus!!! I do hope that Severus & Nicholas will be able to build another Philosopher
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, it\'s always great to come back from a \"Computer-free\" break and have somethiood ood to read ^_^
Anyways, now that I actuahavehave some time to go into this.. I\'m in a Role Playing Story at the moment.. basicly, one person has characters they write as, the other has theirs, so on, I\'m sure you get the picture. Well, one of the characters I have at one point became tangled up in the affairs of another character. they spent so long dodging around what was there with a relationship, but they finally figured things out, though there was still some fustrations here and there. Nothing is ever the lovey-dovey-the-rest-of-the-world-has-stopped-because-we-are-in-love situation, it\'s sort of reallt twisted and tagled web of resopnsibilities and such... I am planning on putting the archives of it up somewhere... I might put em here... It creates a very long story... it all began August 29th of 2003... lord only knows if it will ever end...
Look at me rambling! Sorry about that, anyways, I was just noting how situations were a bit similar with characters. I\'m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
Anyways, now that I actuahavehave some time to go into this.. I\'m in a Role Playing Story at the moment.. basicly, one person has characters they write as, the other has theirs, so on, I\'m sure you get the picture. Well, one of the characters I have at one point became tangled up in the affairs of another character. they spent so long dodging around what was there with a relationship, but they finally figured things out, though there was still some fustrations here and there. Nothing is ever the lovey-dovey-the-rest-of-the-world-has-stopped-because-we-are-in-love situation, it\'s sort of reallt twisted and tagled web of resopnsibilities and such... I am planning on putting the archives of it up somewhere... I might put em here... It creates a very long story... it all began August 29th of 2003... lord only knows if it will ever end...
Look at me rambling! Sorry about that, anyways, I was just noting how situations were a bit similar with characters. I\'m definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(beating self around head and shoulders with braid) I should go and iron my hands for not finding this beautiful story before! This is a fresh approach, which is always welcome, to the post-war time, and a gripping mystery. More, please! More! More!
Blessed be
Dame Niamh
Blessed be
Dame Niamh
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! I\'m back again with another review! Wow... the last two chapters were crazy! The whole thing with the celestial sphere was really cool--I wish I c I could have seen something like that with my own eyes. I also laughed when Ron and Serverus had no idea what the internet was--I love it when people get that funny confused look on their faces; it\'s just hysterical to me.
Anywho, chapter 11 was just as crazy. I was nervous for a little bit when Hermoine fell into the water like that. And how she was miles out in the water had me nervous that some kind and loving shark was going to come along. That was a really interesting way to describe the anti-apparation effect. I had sort of wondered just how bad it would be if somebody ran against it and there it was! Really good detail with that, you know.
Psst...would you mind reading my story. I need some more opinions on it. It\'s called \"The Way Back Home\" and you can find it under my fabulous profile. ^_^
I\'ll be back for more!
Ciao!
Anywho, chapter 11 was just as crazy. I was nervous for a little bit when Hermoine fell into the water like that. And how she was miles out in the water had me nervous that some kind and loving shark was going to come along. That was a really interesting way to describe the anti-apparation effect. I had sort of wondered just how bad it would be if somebody ran against it and there it was! Really good detail with that, you know.
Psst...would you mind reading my story. I need some more opinions on it. It\'s called \"The Way Back Home\" and you can find it under my fabulous profile. ^_^
I\'ll be back for more!
Ciao!