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This is a wonderfully written story!

I agree that for the most part, the \'Dumbledore lives happily ever after\' endings are very boring, and I will continue to read this story.

I figured that Albus would be dying shortly but I didn

You\'re not going to lose a reader here, with me. I love angst; it shows that you have the bravery to treat characters with a sense of true life. The emotions you invoke with writing this are so much more important to me than what it would be if everyone lived \"happily ever after.\" I am truly enjoying this story of yours... tears, heartache, and all. Thank you so much for providing us with this entertainment. :)

I will start this by saying that I will be reading your story to the end!!! This is a very good story, well written & deserves to be read!!! It is your story & I respect whatever path you choose to take it on!!!

Chapter 13... I am very sad that Albus has died!!! I do understand the reasoning you gave behind your choice!!! Keeping Albus alive would have made for a very easy story to write so without easyeasy, I am looking forward to seeing the way you work this all out!!!

I am quite inteested in seeing what is in the book that Albus told Hermione to read!!! What does it contain & will it help them help Severus?!?

As for Severus, I do hope that he will realize that Hermione did the right thing by not sleeping with him!!! He is a smart man that is in a lot of pain & I think he will see she was right!!!

Looking forward to chapter 14, Deb >^..^<

\"La da dee, dee da! Oh look, Albus will be okay! Now everything will be fine! Let

Lady, you did absolutely right. I have never respected Albus Dumbledore more than in his death, here. It was beautifully written. If I\'d expected sunshine and kittens from this story I would have stopped reading when you described the bloody room of souls. Your interpretation of JKR\'s world seems sincere, and the way you\'re crafting this story, the dimensions you are showing of thveryvery human people, is amazing and wonderful. I have no doubt that Dumbledore\'s death will propel this story into the next few turns of the plot. I look forward to more from you.

Very good chapter! Very sad, but very well written. Keep up the good work! I\'m definitely going to continue following it, so update soon!

Well I\'m shocked. I was hoping they would have been able to help Dumbledore but now things are going to be even more difficult for Severus. How the here tre they going to prove his innocence now? Great chapter and very sad. I don\'t blame Hermione for not giving herself to Severus. I mean not that she did not want to but I understand the reasoning of it. Please update soon, the suspense is killing me.

Blah! No one is going to stop reading your story, you silly rabbit! It is a deliteful tale, and I look forward to reading more. Although your Snape does not seem like he would shag to forget. Maybe he was attemping to express feelings and is afraid that this might be the last chance for it. And now believes his his feelings are not returned, hence the slumped shoulders? I\'m sure all will become clear with time.
Dama

Don\'t worry about people dropping off because you made a certain plot decision. It\'s all up to you, and if we buy into the world you\'re creating (and by that, I am talking about the direction the characters are going, and consequently, their world/s), then we have to accept what the characters are also struggling to accept.

I love your story. It\'s one of my favourites that I always check up on. :)

*smiles*

Thank you for a great work! :)