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Chapter 15... Still playing catch up here!!! As with this entire story so far I am very much taken by how you are writing the way these characters interact with each other!!! I really like how you used Binns in your story!!! I also like the fact that you have kept Fudge as a character that I LOVE to HATE & I can only hope that he will get more than his just desserts when all is said & done!!!

What you have written about the book so far is very interesting & look forward to learning more!!! It makes perfect & frightening sense as to how the Dementors are created!!! Who in their right mind would want to do such a thing?!? Wait, Fudge, right mind, 2 things that do not belong in the same thought or sentence!!! I am VERY curious to find out his motives!!!

I am looking forward to chapter 16, Deb >^..^<

P.S., I am very sorry to hear that you are going through something so trying!!! I have been put through things (including a legal battle that lasted much too long!!!) by people that were so called friends:( People like that make you much more cautious when considering allowing someone new into your life!!! It is quite sad to know that such people exsist, seemingly put in our lives just to see how badly they can dick it up!!! I do hope that all of this works out well for you & know that you do have people that are thinking of you!!! HUGS, Deb >^..^<

Great chapter. It seems like the shit is going to hit the fan like now. What the hell is Fudge thinking? Or rather is he thinking at all? I loved the part in which Severus basically took control of the situation. I like how he has unknowingly become a sort of leader for them, he certainly is still an authority figure. Please don\'t keep us waiting too long.

It was truly a wonderful chapter -- well written, and the plot is developing in an engrossing way. Your powers of description are incredible. Sorry about your RL -- sending good thoughts and vibes your way!

Great chapter. Inspite of everything you have been going through(and it sounds like A LOT!!), you managed to write another awesome cliffhanger. I am sure that most of your loyal readers will be able to wait for an update while you get things right in your life. Thank you so much for a wonderful read and I am hoping that whatever is going on in your life will be resolved soon.

I\'m sorry for your troubles but I think that this chapter was well worth the wait. It explained a lot and helped me to understand better about things.
ArienAstera

I loved this chapter...Can\'t wait until you post again

Thats an incredible interesting story. Very exciting, very realistic, but as desperate the situation for all four of them may be in the moment, there is l hol hope.
And I love: \"Severus would never apologize or excuse his actions\" - thats our Severus!

Only one thing: do you real believe the Americans would help them?

I\'ve dabbled in fanfic, in various fandoms, since before I even knew what fanfic was...but I\'ve never had the courage to share any. However, I\'ve resolved to give feedback to the people who do have the courage.

I\'m enjoying this tale immensely. It\'s every bit as gripping as any of the published work I\'m reading, and the only disadvantage I see is that I can\'t read your work in the bath...well, and that it\'s not complete.

Thank you for the journey you\'re taking me on; I\'m quite enjoying the ride.

More specifically, I\'m really enjoying your take on Severus. You\'ve keim sim snarky, but soft as well. Beautiful.

Loved the update, it makes me happy. So they\'re all going...are you planning on killing off some more characters, or do we get to keep our favorite Gryffindors and Potions Master? *grin*
No one took a hit out on you, but remember, if we don\'t get updates, we get grumpy. I may just have to send a bunny assassin after you if there isn\'t an update soon...(please don\'t ask). Looking forward to another update, don\'t worry, no assassin bunnies unless you take forever (forever = more than a few weeks).

Have a great day, week, year, life. Take your pick. Ciao.

Chapter 14... What a chapter & what a plan!!! I think it\'s brilliant & scary, but it may be the only thing that they can do!!! I feel so badly for Hemione, she has so much going through her mind, wanting to clear their names while keeping all of them safe in the process!!!

I am so glaat Sat Severus came to her!!! I just wish that they would both be done with it & express their real feelings!!!

Can\'t wait for MORE!!! Til chapter 15, Deb >^..^<