rate_review Reviews

ARGH! How could you stop there! And please don\'t kill Severus! Write! Write! Write! GREAT story!

They robbed Walmart, that is the best thing I have read in a while. I think its hysterical. Great writing. I await your next chapter with bated breath.

Wow! Fantastic writing as always! You\'re evil for the cliffie, so you better update soon!!!!

I still say they should have grabbed the laptop.

And maybe some moist towlettes for when they\'re finished in the Room.

Ewwww.

Seriously, this was one tense chapter ~ you were unfortunately vivid in your descriptions of the Room (thanks in advance for those nightmares, btw).

You go, girl. There She Is. You love me -- you know you do!

;D

Yah, update! I\'m a lil\' worried, so I think you should update soon so I don\'t have to worry through all my final exams. You wouldn\'t want that, would you?! :) Love the update, looking forward to more.

Grey-
Mad great story you have going here- completely engaging. Sorry for not having reviewed before; I just suck as a person. *shrugs* I was born a bastard; it\'s in the blood, you know? Right, well now that I have that bit of irony out and laughing, on with the raving:
1) Hermione feels completely on character; Snape, though, at times, the amount of physicnternteraction he has (ie: the early on comforting and such) with Hermione seems slightly off. Although, now, at this point and time, it\'s all ral-ral-like. So, yeah, ignore me.
2) I\'m glad you killed Albus. Well, not *glad*, but a writer I appreciate the maturity of the decision. (Oh gods, I sound so madly pompous. Grrr...)
3) The whole dementor thing: fantastic idea! Bully for you, Grey! I\'ve been reading all sorts of mad cap hp fics out there and this has been the first to take such a direct spin on the damned things. And you do it so brilliantly at that. Go you!
Right, well, that\'s it with my raving. If you\'d add me to your update list, I\'d be madly grateful. Chuce and such.

I don\'t think it\'s possible to express in words the joy of reading this. An intricately woven plot with various twists and turns that leave me hanging on the edge of my seat. I\'ve reread it several times and come away with something different each time. Can\'t wait for more.

This is an absolutely fabulous story! The angst is nicely portioned, enough for the story to have the correct feel but not so much as to prompt me to curl up in the fetal position in a corner sobbing. The whole epoolpool of blood thing giving birth to dementors is a very interesting idea. I also really like your character interaction, especially the Hermione Severus bits. Looking forward to more :)

Wow! What a chapter... it was worth the wait. RL comes first, but I\'m very selfishly glad you found time to post this chapter. This is a wonderful escalation of the antagonists apparently overwing ing power which our few noble heroes must face. The foreshadowing of a dead Snape is a bit heart wrenching but maybe a very serious lesson for Hermione and Snape to learn. I look forward to your act 3...

Hey hon! Absolutely fabulous chapter! That whole part with the Dementors was really interesting and it got me to thinking that what you\'vitteitten might just be the case for them. CREEPY! *scary music playing* Of course, I will be back for more.

Now, about my story. I\'ve actually added two chapters since then, chapters 17 and 18, and I took into consideration about what you were talking about in your fabulous reviews. I\'m working on chapter 19 right now, so that should be up late tomorrow evening (Pacific Standard Time), with chapter 20 being posted on Monday at the latest. The story is getting good, if I do say so myself!

Oh and about that sh\"fr\"friend\", I hate people like that. What happened to being honest?! Geez, some freak is always out for a buck. But don\'t worry, karma is a boomerang...no matter where you go it always comes back.


Ciao!