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I think utopic is fine; it doesn\'t really need explanation. I do appreciate the careful attention to grammer, spelling, and syntax, and I think your description of the scene in the department of mysteries was chillingly well-done!

I hope that you will continue to update this story.

I\'m enjoying this so much! Very intriguing. Please keep up the good work! I love the interaction between Hermione and Snape, too - especially all the \"biting\" comments. :)

to be very honest with you i have to begin that i am not a fan of hg/ss fics where hg is finished with her schooling at hogwarts, nor am i a fan of fics where they must go on a quest to find or solve something. shortly after your second chap. was posted i was searching for a new, good fic to read about hg/ss when i found yours. i was highly impressed with your style and the plot of the story. i have been checking every few days to see if you had posted a new chap. i hope that you stick with this fic (i can\'t stand it when someone writes a great story only to never finish it half way through). i can\'t wait to find out what happends with hg and ss along their way... and even though this doesn\'t have that happy tone it should hooked me. i can\'t wait until chap 5 is posted because i\'m dying to know what happens next... thanks for sharing such a wonderful story... sorry that this review probably isn\'t very great and things of that nature but it is late (but i still wanted you to know how muchnjoynjoy reading your fic...)

Another great chapter. I never thought about the werewolves, I would have been fresh meat, oops. Anyway, I love the line where Hermione says her Harry and Ron running from danger or towards it depending on the year. That was greatic ric relief from the seriousness of the situation. As well as her wanting to give Snape something pointy. Gotta love a girl who has that wry dry sense of humor. Post soon.

elementaldeity

This is looking to be an excellent story. It\'s well-written and intriguing. Keep up the great work!

Um, just for the record (and before anyone calls the Division of Family Services), my three kids have been home with ME AND their friends (thank you very much, I successfully fed and cared for 10 children at lunch today...) for most of the past two weeks and it looks like they\'re going to be spending more time with me than their tax-dollar supported school for at least another week. Not that I\'m bitter but I don\'t get paid to teach these people NOT to talk with their moth open, not to interrupt, that you always need to wipe and that Mama needs to be left alone when she\'s reading ImmaculateGreyLady\'s stuff because it takes actual thought to appreciate it.

And I do -- appreciate it, I mean, even if I\'m not always able to stifle the blood curdling screams of 3 girls fighting over a bathroom.

Now, if someone reading this hasn\'t read \"Disturbances\" -- do not pass \"Go\" and do not collect $200; go read that. You\'ll love it AND you\'ll want to adopt a non-rodent type rodent.

Geez, Erin, you have GOT to stop sending me Tanqueray.... makes me too chatty.

Kisses a c a completely chaste and politically correct way),

MoaningMyrtle

wow awesome story much love for ti i hope you keep it going very insiteful a pleasent relief from all of the all-too-happy-go-lucky fics i have read latey it is good to see fresh ideas and thoughts out there *thumbs up* keep it up

Just found this. Thank you for not leaving Snape a zombie for longer than you did. I love my snarky sarcastic Snape way better. I\"m looking forward to the next chapter.

now i\'m soooo confused! snape doesn\'t remember moldie voldie dying? or having his soul sucked out? and just why does hermione need to talk to dumbledore? where\'d that ol dustmop go? love your snarky snape! does the ministry even know snape\'s missing from their stores? can he just get away with vacant expressions in public? i can just see folks cursing and spitting on him, then \"boo\"! he,he! aloha, mele

I am completely blown away, that was deep. The whole thing, but especially the Department of Mysteries part with the pool of blood, that hit the ick factor pretty high. I enjoyed the first three chapters and I anticipate more, this seems like a good twist. I never thought of Voldemort like that, like Satan, that was an intriguing twist. Post more soon.

elementaldeity