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for Mephistopheles

by Semidazed

person Snapeaholic
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'s freaky. Some script error on my review. What that was supposed to say is that this is going to be a fic for ages! It\'s wonderfully well wrn, an, and I love it!
person Gabriele
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I see light at the horizont! Holding her in his lap is a good idea for the beginnig ......
I had an idea that this horror room is not only disgusting and frightening but also dangerous.
Its an interesting story you wriere ere and I look foreward to updates!
person WizardingAngel
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this is a great story and I can\'t wait to see what happens next....as always keep up the great work
person elementaldeity
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To find out a girl died in that room, yuck. I was pleasantly surprized to see Snape so comforting to Hermione. At first I thought it would have been Harry. But was thrilled to find out Snape does care. Aww.

elementaldeity
person influenza1918
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She awoke with a jerk many hours later.

That\'s happened to me many times. However, I don\'t think Snape would appreciate being called a jerk.

Dude, I crack myself up.

Great chapter!
person otherside
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great fic, i love the lead in with zombie!snape (does hermione have a top 10 list of fun things to do with zombie snape? sorry, spoiling the angst here) i really loved your description of toom oom in the department of myeteries. it really put me in that awful place, and i\'m really interested in where this story is going :)
person excessivelyperky
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far--and I can just see the Ministry doing what it did, too. Pity Snape didn\'t have access to his blackmail files in time, but I digress. Good movment in this chapter, looking forward to more.
person Gabriele
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Phuuuu - interesting story! This is truely not a society I would like to live in: first the Dementor
person nocturnus
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interresting aproach to the couple.
Have you ever visit WIKTT? It would be nice if you anounce your up dates there.
person hopelsydream
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
even though i know that you were kidding you\'re right, i do like your writing style... it does not come across as simple and stupid nor does it come across as overdone and flowery. i love to read and often when i\'m on the computer i end up reading a hermione/snape fiction. its amazing how many stories look like someone pulled them out of their ass. i\'m sure that most people right here would be going, \'what do you know about writing?\' and i would agree with them-that i couldn\'t talk unless i write, which i do. it always bothers me when an author writes a story that has no personal touch to it and looks as if i could belong to five other people....another thing i love about your plot... i\'ve been continually thinking oe roe room in which hermione saved snape\'s soul.....very inspiring...so far i haven\'t been disappointed...i can\'t wait to see what happens next-even if its driving me crazy that i have to wait for you to post the next chapter...