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the kiss that sent her bearly over the edge and he backs away from it.......... sounds like most men anyway lol......... well anyway I love the penquien joke that was funny and I loved....................Smiley face was excellent too .......as always keep with the great work

Of co I w I would like to be added to the update list. I\'ve been checking every so often to see if you\'ve updated and have wanted to scream bloody murder that you haven\'t (patience isn\'t one of my finer points). When I saw that you had updated I had to do a double date (I was so happy that I felt like a little child being offered their wildest wish).
I love how you added humor throughout this chapter. \"She was tempted to tell him that his face could freeze that way.\" really stood out to me--so did \"Hermione was inches from suggesting they crawl on all fours.\" When I was reading I was continually laughing and received some unfriendly looks.....
I love how you added the part about penguins and the leopard seal. I love penguins and the mental picture of Snape and Hermione being charged at by a leopard seal was great... (laughed very hard through that scene--well through most of the chapter).
I\'m highly impressed at how in character you\'ve made Snape. I think that it\'s all fine and dandy if someone wants to write a story using Harry Potter characters it\'it\'s slightly weird when they made them too much out of character (they could have always posted their story under original....).
Once again I am highly looking forward to the next chapter

Fantastic, m\'dear. Humor (loved the seal bit!), romance (although somewhat unwanted), random facts about penguins... what else could you ask for in a fanfiction? More smiley faces? Hermione giving Snape ballet lessons? And as for that old (coughcoughinsanecoughcough) Dumbledore, the connection is probably candy-related. Those things are laced with drugs of some sort... don\'t have the lemon drops!

when i was reading i was thinking to myself that they should go to antarctica just because it\'d be cool--so, great choice :D when they go there, though, do they meet something filled with drama? you need something to keep people unsure as to what\'s going to happext..xt...
when do we get to find out why snape acted the way he did towards the twins?
do we get to see more of harry and ron or any other main characters? like i said, something to spiece things up....
but as usual i love it....keep up the great work...

the argument between them selves was excelnt and very well done.................................. And the fact that Hermione could get that angery at a person and through something was excent Idea.................................And i can\'t wait to see what antartica is going to bring.................... as always keep up the great work.

I am enjoying the development of this story. The room where he was imprisoned was genius. I found that the cannon account of the brains sinister but that sort of slipped to the background. I mean whose brains are they? Your story has got me thinking more about them now.

*crying very hard* i can\'t believe that you would end the chapter like that! how rude (although on a fair level i have to say that it was a great cliff hanger...)!!
i loved hermione\'s nightmare...i know how hard it can be to write dreams and yours came across smooth and as a real dream would. i am honestly looking forward to what happens next....

I\'m so glad to wake up and see two new chapters. The breakfast scene between Hermione and Snape was great, very casual and comfortable. I however felt really sorry for Snape when those two bitches Padma and Parvati came into Hermiones home and started insulting him. I\'m suriprised Hermione didn\'t throw them out before but I guess then it would not have made for good writing. Great story I can\'t wait for more.

I want to throttle the Parvati twins. I know Snape is more controlled, but man I wanted to hurt em. I know it was part of the challenge, but poor Sev, Aww.

elementaldeity

Girl, you have a serious talent here. This is defiintely one of the most well-written and engaging stories I\'ve read. It just keeps getting better and better. I love it, love it, love it! Keep up the good work! It looks like this i