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Hon, I you\'re slacking! LOL, naw just kidding. You\'re doing really good with this story. This chapter was just as good. I liked the idea of using the constellations as a map--it is very possible for something like that to occur. I also liked how you set up the strained relationship between Hone one and Severus because it shows that they\'re not just going to fall into it--they\'re going to fight it all the way because of their personalities; the way I think that they should. Besides, it makes for a great story!

Now, about my use of the word \"disturbing\": that was the only word that I could think of to describe what she saw in there. I sure as hell would have called it the same because you just don\'t forget something as scary as that. Hence, my word usage. ^_^ You said that this story wasn\'t an NC-17? I thought it was! Oh, well shows what I know...geez, we\'re supposed to learn something when we go to college! ^_^

Keep up the good work--I will definitely be back for more!

Ciao!

Your writing sucked me in. Your characterization kept me hooked. Your delicious prose keeps me panting for more. My heart races when I see you\'ve updated this fic, and I feel like a giddy schoolgirl again. Thanks for all your hard work. I love it.

Have I told you lately that I love you? Oh yeah, just last night....{she moaned -- get it???}

I SO love your sense of humor and I SO love your writing. This chapter was great. You built thustrustration over not being able to find Albus perfectly and then gave us the \"Ah ha!\" constellation moment. Brilliant, I tell you, just brilliant and I didn\'t see it coming AT ALL. I love when that happens.

The frustration in the relationship between Hermione and Snape is going beautifully as well, with both of them questioning exactly why they\'re (their, there) feeling the way they do and whether or not they should act on it (they should, they should!).

I can\'t wait for chapter 10 from you. Of course, I can\'t wait for chapter 13 from me either but that\'s a different story...

GO YOU! and as you would say, MMMMMWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAA! :*

another wonderful chapters and I love this story.................... You are doing a excelent jobthisthis............. but can\'t hel won wonnder what is going to happen on July 5th and for them not to go home............. I will see in the next chapter I hope and as always keep up with the excelent work.

Yay! Getting to the good fun relationship parts! I love the angst and drama and whatnot, mind you, but it just makes me happy when stuff works out, you know? I don\'t know if it\'s just me but Harry\'s message confused me... what exactly did he mean? And I have read \"Teacher, Teacher\" - Gods that woman has a way with food. ::stomach grumbles:: Right, shall ignore that for the moment. Anyway... I\'m glad you figured out what you\'re doing. Feel free to let the rest of us know by UPDATING.

The whole constellation thing was inspirational. And it does sound like something Albuuld uld do, he\'s flaky like that, genius, but flaky, which is exactly him. I was so happy to see an update. Is Snape finally deciding he is gonna do something about his attraction? Thank Merlin, he waited long enough. I know the muses work like this, but I\'m rather impatient. Sorry.

elementaldeity

I love this fic. This restrained kind of relationship fits Hremione and Snapes personalities really well. About the length thing though - when I went to England I was told that I was five foot nine and not 176 cm, which is what we say in Sweden. So allthough most Europeans, I think, use the meter system Britain is still lagging behind. Growing up as a witch Hermione would propably be even less inclined to use the meter system - considering that the wizaeding world still uses galleons et.c..

This story is amazing. The whole thing with the room was highly disturbing and I was in the frame of mind to run like Hermoine did. That makes this story especially good because I was feeling what she was feeling. Hopefullyey fey find Albus soon. Also, I totally understand the situation with the Patil twins--it made me a little angry--but I think that it needed to be there.

Ciao!

Another wonderful chapter from a wonderful writer, I hope we are going somewhere with all this angst, both Hermione and Snape are characters, I believe, that will go after what they want as soon as they decide they want it. I know they are still deciding and weighing risks, but I hope it gets more complicated soon. I don\'t need an email cause I\'m on this site daily, hehehe.Post as soon as you can!

elementaldeity

This is brilliant, its always good to read something that is a little different. There is something about that seal thought that bugs me but I can\'t put my finger on it.