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Great chapter. I\'m glad to see Harry and Ron have joined in to help. I\'m a li con confused. Is Dumbledore hiding or was he kidnapped? If the war is over why would he not have stayed behind, why would he not have defended Severus? I\'m thinking you\'ll explain this at some point I\'m just curious.

You don\'t suyou you wouldn\'t suck, you couldn\'t suck if you tried (insert tacky double entendre here: ) and I don\'t do anng mng more than move a comma or two. Oh, and I leave lots of fangirl comments in your stuff that make you have to pick through your chapters deleting them before you post.

Now stop that infernal whining and go write more!

That moment between Snape and Hermione when she tells him she does truly think that much of him was lovely ~ and 10 points to you for gi us us the word of the day!

Ooooh pretty hair. Sorry, just love the idea of mahogany-ish hair, considering I\'ve always wanted that color myself, except I\'d feel too vain dying my hair. I dunno, I\'m weird... don\'t even wear makeup. But you don\'t need to know that. I love the chapter, and can\'t wait for more. Put me on the update list, if you can.

I do so wish that I could remember what list(s) I had seen your story mentioned on so that I could go back & thank them for pointing me in its direction!!! I do want to thank you though for sharing this story, I am very much enjoying it!!!

Chapter 10... I am so happy to see that Hermione & Severus are becoming closer (well as close as they are comfortable with for now)!!! They are so very good for each other!!!

I am also happy to see that Harry & Ron are now helping them more, not to mention the Order, Minerva & Remus!!! Hermione & Severus are so very lucky to have people that care & want to see this wrong righted!!! Nice touch that Harry & Ron didn\'t push the issue of Hermione & Severus being \'together\'!!! I also like Hermione\'s convictions to Severus!!! I have to agree with her: \"I

I LIKE ANGSTY! I read 80% angst and 20% fluffy lemons. Fluff is there for the purpose of lightening up things so you aren\'t too stressed to read the angst. One of mltimltime favorite movies is American Werewolf In London. It was the first movie that I watched where it had you rolling on the floor laughing then in a heatbeat would scare the shit out of you. It is an extremely effective technique. It is harder to do that so suddenly in the written word but it is really wonderfull when you find a peice that can. Poe could do that although even his humor was dark and subltle.

This story is comming along nicely. If anyone is abandoning you it is because you didn\'t give them immediate lemon gratification. Tough. A good story is worth much more than cheap lemons.

I hadn\'t gotten to this story right away, but I am really enjoying it noat Iat I have. Of course Albus would only use a pattern that would be so obvious yet impossible to notice, though I wonder how that transposes onto a flat map. Looking forward to the next chapter while grumbling about cliffies!
Da Feather

This is a truly intriguing piece. Severus and Hermione\'s relationship is truly complicated in this story...it\'s wonderful to read. And the note from Harry...has the Ministry figured out what\'s going on?! I shall now commence in my shameless begging for an update. Please please please please.

Have a good day. Ciao.

OMG....you can\'t leave it their!! what did harrys letter mean? update asap!
please email me at lollylips3@hotmail.com when u update this exellent story!!!

Chapters 1-9... I wasn\'t going to start another new story, but your\'s has gotten some very good reviews as well as noted on a couple of the lists I\'m on... in other words, I had to find out for myself!!! That is why I have spent most of the day (between everything my family requires of me) to read everything you have written of this story so far!!!

I am very impressed with what I have read!!! You have a very good imagination, a wonderful sense of humor & a talent for writing romance for frustrated charas!!!s!!! The scene in the room that held his soul was well written & easy to picture with the mind\'s eye!!! I am also glad to see that they FINALLY got in a good kiss & have come to some form of agreement that there is something there that is worth the bother!!!

I am looking forward to seeing what they will find in Oaxaca, Mexico as well as hoping that they will take a few minutes (or hours) to REALLY find out just how worth the bother they are to each other!!! I hope that they find Albus soon so that things will be cleared up & they won\'t have to worry about him being caught non-zombified (not even sure if that\'s a real word)!!!

I would also like to be added to your list of people to receive notes of updates*

I\'m really loving this fic! ^_^ Especially the way they dance around the subject of a relationship, trying to ignore it. Seems very realistic, it\'s in human nature it seems. In a way Snape and Hermoine remind me of a characters in an RPS I\'m in...
It\'s coming along really nice though, keep it up! I\'ll be checking back for updates ^_^