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for Eye of the Beholder

by BlueSchmoo

person Andie Bubbles
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I started reading this long ago on fanfiction.com and am so happy I found the conclusion here! It is a wonderful story. I wouldn\'t change a thing. You did a fabulous job with the whole story. Congratulations!
person sc
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh! i don\'t want it to be over! well, anyway. i absolutely loved the last sentence! (and i\'m really glad you made it a happy end) *sighs* i hope you\'reng tng to write and post a new story! and at the risc of sounding pathetic: I\'ll really, truly and deeply miss sasha.
stebu
person White Lilac
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s oooooooveeeer! Snif!
OK, I think I would have liked a more explicit \"outright passion\"..)
A)
As for the epilogue, it was a little weird, because it was like being quite detached from all those reactions, and then, suddenly, the lines about Snape. Those were... wow! I was touched with a few sentences!
I hope you will soon start another fic!
Big hugs!
person Carmen
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmeepp! *tear of happiness* that was a good ending. well as much as i complain that i want more i kwow this is the end. im sad but i\'ll just find another really long fanfic to get hooked on. congrats on ur amazing story. lots of love, carmen.
person Silvana
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story, Blue! I did notice a discrepancy in chapter 38. Severus calls her Miss Rathborn, her last name is Rowan. Only mistake I caught, though. *whispers* Better than some others, I must say. *winks* Ta!
person Carmen
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
eeeepppppppp its over *tear*. i almost did cry but im stong, i will hold it togther. this fic has been amazing, it gave me something to look foward to after school. it really warmed my heart how severus cared for sasha and hope one day that kind of love will hapen to me, i wouldnt mind it being w/snape either.*laughs and abruptly stops and clears throat* anyways i just want to say thanx for writing it and emailing me to talk about it. i really truly apreciate it and good luck w/any other fics u de toe to write, i bet they\'ll b as wonderful as this one. *gives blueschmoo a big bear hug*
person msmalcontent
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still following this and enjoying every word. Must admit you had me shocked last chapter! Well done.
person White Lilac
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sigh in relief! Just a dream!
OK, maybe that was not such a bad idea...
Honestly, I really liked it. The dream was perfect with her situation. As when one is having a very thick sleep, and gets entangled in the sheets, and is unable to disentagled oneself; and the wand in her back; all mixed with her fears... Perfect.

Well, well, well, wandering how people is going to react to her new face (I don\'t know why, I guess how Snape is going to react to her. But after my last \"guess\", I think I will shut up). And, more important, how her character is going to change now the look of the others is to be different. Will she still be interested in Severus?

Hugs!
person Carmen
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! YAY!!! it worked! im so happy! i really liked how u wrote that ch. it was enchanting. i hope thats not the end b/c if it is i will be sad.i want to read peoples reaction to her face and everything. ppllleeeeeaaaassssssseeeeeeeee update soon!
person Carmen
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ur mean white lilac! its all better now. geez.