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RE: Chapter One

Nice beginning for a first chapter, but where is the rest of the chapter?

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RE: chapter two

Beware of cats with aspirations of playing Matchmaker! LOL

;-D

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hey babes! VERY interesting start to the story. I love that it\'s from crookshanks point of view. Gotta admit Snape/Hermione is not a pairing that ever crossed my mind (mind you the only Harry Potter pairings I\'d ever thought about were the nice innocent ones from the book, never even thought about adult fic about them - i know in some ways i\'m so naive - hehe) but your writing is so good that I\'ll definitely keep reading. As for the fromatting it all looks fine on my screen, or had you adjusted it? Anyways, good job, can\'t wait for more - you are writing more aren\'t you?
Sarah
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This is an interesting idea, please do carry on.

i really like the premise here, and i think
you\'ve got loads of possibilities here.

keep up the good work, and i look forward
to more.

~blessings~
ldf

Sounds like the beginning of a great/funny story. Keep up the good work, and please update soon!

Really, really liking it so far - but the second chapter was far too short. *pout* More soon please.

Chapter 2... I really like how you have written Crookshanks\' thoughts about Severus as well as his feelings about Harry!!! I will be watching for your next update & am hoping that there will be word on how Hermione is doing*