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by ElectricAndroid

person HeadSorcoressofSlytherinHouse
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm...creepy...
person Betha
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
That\'s all I can say - Wow.
It\'s in a way a bit of a turnaround from the other Narcissa/Lily fics I\'ve read, in that the others all seemed to have Narcissa as the dominant one and this one has Lily in dominant...
It\'s fantasmic. Utterly fantasmic.
person Anvanimaserke
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! That was so great!!! LUV IT!!! thats going on my recs ^^ this is so wonderfully done, you usually dont see femslash done like this, but its an amazing piece of work!!! I really enjoyed reading this, the words flowed so smoothly and the way you wrote created such vivid mental pictures. it was written in this beautifully poetic style too, amazing!!
person Svetlana
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Really, really nice. I\'d love for there to be a companion piece from Narcissa\'s POV.
person VeryPure
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Well, that was different....I think you could go farther with this. Narcissa and Lily is a hard pairing to get into, but I think if you wrote more on the subject it would be more believable. Still, good work. ^^
person alostblackcat
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow.... very possessive

i liked it though