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for Burning Serpent

by raniyah

person dreamer22
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting....very interesting..... very good so far, and I hope that you PLEASE to continue this story as I enjoy it....its different then others I have read. The one thing that confused me was that Severus is really a women...or something, not really sure..... and I would REALLY like to find out... PLEASE update!!!!!!!!!
person carol
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i love your story " Burning Serpent" you better make same more parts to it its soo cool so far your so good at writeing please keep going on this story
person Raven
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i\'ve been reading this fic on fanfiction.net and it\'s very good. since this web site allows for NC-17 are there going to be any bed scenes with Severina and Voldemort? or Harry and Draco? any new little brothers and sisters for Harry on the way? (*hint* *wink* *wink*).
anyway keep up the good work, i\'ll be checking fpdatpdates on this web site as well!

update soon!!!
person hgodhgoddess
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
definately interesting... kinda a shock at the end of the second chapter... but yeah i can see why you say there\'s no ss/hp in this story... *grins* it\'d be uh... kinky? Twisted? *grins* smutty? lol... keep writing though... nice story
person Miss Lesley
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot Damn. This is a good fic. please feel free to continue nd bring joy to my life

person Miss Teigne
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay...I\'m not sure I\'m feeling the Severina thing yet *shudder*, but I\'m interested and willing to see where you take this. Harry Voldemort, eh? Or is it Harry Riddle? Or are they a modern liberal family, making it Harry Snape-Riddle? Yee gods, the possibilities.