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for If Only To Feel...

by Jadestonedreams

person Keikokin
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good slow building but please only one correction Lucius Malfoy is how the elder Malfoy\'s name.
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I most definatly enjoy this story. The fact that I\'m reviewing should tell you how much. I\'m lazy like that, not reviewing when I know I\'m sitting theretingting for someone to update. This coming from the girl that gets irritated when can can see the hit count going up on her stories but people aren\'t reviewing. I am such a hypocrite.

Anyway, I am very interested to see your interpretation of how Harry will respond to his coming of age. Most of the time, when I know what direction a story is headed in, I tend to discontinue reading. However, you seem to have kept my attention. In my odd way, that was supposed to be a really nice compliment. Hehe.

Other than a few grammer and spellinstakstakes, you seem to be doing very well with this story. I\'d offer my services to beta, but I\'ve never done it before. Even so, if you ever need someone to do a read through, I\'d be more than happy to help out.

-Ashley
person Jade Malame
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the story!!!! Please update soon!!!

Love Jade
person Winter
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is wonderful i cant wait till u update please let it be soon
person Keikokin
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whole lot of angst going on isn\'t there? please more scenes between our boys?
person river
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I was so glad to see the new chapter!!!! I really liked your story, and was worried you\'d dropped it. :(
Anyway, Glad your back and can\'t wait to see what you have in store for us!!!!

-river
person mojo_jojo241
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person mojo_jojo241
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...................question. y the hell is draco changing into a gurl and back into a boi? is it just me or is anyone else confused by this?
person Keikokin
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK the gender switching is making me want a beer, but I am glad Draco the guy is back....so Harrys thinking about Draco as a mate possibilityhmmmm nifty....I hope the next chapter comes soon....maybe 2?
person Demitria Miriam
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fan-fucking-tastic. Keep writing and updating!