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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good fic i hope that you write more of it soon. this is the first reveiw i have done on this site and i\'m very happy to admit that this is a very very very good fic. i was hoping that you could email me to tell when you have wrote more of this fic. Harry P. and Draco M. pairings ROCK!!!!! ^_^ LOL
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay okay i pushed it. are ya happy now? pushy lil git.
reallye the the story so far. hope to read more soon. tired. lots \'a big words to use. all of em good. to sleepy to spell em correctly. good job. its past 2 a.m. good night.
reallye the the story so far. hope to read more soon. tired. lots \'a big words to use. all of em good. to sleepy to spell em correctly. good job. its past 2 a.m. good night.
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the fic can\'t wait till you update *hint hint* ^_^
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May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello, i just wanted to tell you that i think your fic is really, really good.
I would like to leave a longer review, but im at school right now and i have to go.
I hope you update soon, love Sofia
I would like to leave a longer review, but im at school right now and i have to go.
I hope you update soon, love Sofia
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dude, i like this story. love harry the veela. wonder what\'s up with draco, though. and i hope seamus ain\'t got the hots for him. totally can\'t wait for the next one.
keep up the great work, and i hope you post soon.
keep up the great work, and i hope you post soon.
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh! Must, need, want, desire...MORE! soon please!
Like the premise, not too many with Harry as the Veela. Can\'t wait to see him go into \"overprotective mode\" during Lucius\' visit.
Keep going. The ground work has been lain, now onward to the guts!~
Like the premise, not too many with Harry as the Veela. Can\'t wait to see him go into \"overprotective mode\" during Lucius\' visit.
Keep going. The ground work has been lain, now onward to the guts!~
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! An update. And not a bad chapter. Could you mail me when you post again?
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just started reading this fic. Hmm......more?!!! It\'s interesting to see a Veela!Harry fic. Afterall Draco always seem to be the veela in most of the fics. I think this is the third Veela!Harry fic that I have read. Well, Hmm.......Draco that can turn to a female. Tha\'s interesting. I wonder if Harry realises that he took a virgin that night. I suspect not. *sigh* Poor Draco, I seriously feel for him. I do hope that Harry will sort out his feelings for Draco soon esp that Draco is preggy now *grins* Seamus seemed to have taken an interest in Draco too. Wonder how Harry will react that he realises this. Heheh Jealous!Harry can be fun to read too *grins* MORE??? *puppy eyes*
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this!
The idea of Harry being a veela is very nice!
Can\'t wait to see what happens next.
Update sooooon!
:)
The idea of Harry being a veela is very nice!
Can\'t wait to see what happens next.
Update sooooon!
:)
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, do I start with the good or the bad? Hmm. Decisions, Decisions.
Okay, bad first. Please, get someone to proofread for you. The spelling errors make me what to scream.
And capitalization is key to looking professional.
Okay, now that that\'s over, on to the good.
Yeah, an update! I\'m enjoying you story very much. I like the idea of Harry being the veela instead of Draco.
I can\'t wait for the shoe to drop and for Harry to find out he\'s going nd und up with him. I\'m picking up the hints that you\'re going to make Draco the one who gets...wait should I give that away? Don\'t want to ruin the surprise for the others.
Okay, overall, I rate your story a 4 out of 5. Losing points for spelling and such, otherwise, I\'m waiting for the next chapter impatiently.
Sincerely,
Michelle W.
Okay, bad first. Please, get someone to proofread for you. The spelling errors make me what to scream.
And capitalization is key to looking professional.
Okay, now that that\'s over, on to the good.
Yeah, an update! I\'m enjoying you story very much. I like the idea of Harry being the veela instead of Draco.
I can\'t wait for the shoe to drop and for Harry to find out he\'s going nd und up with him. I\'m picking up the hints that you\'re going to make Draco the one who gets...wait should I give that away? Don\'t want to ruin the surprise for the others.
Okay, overall, I rate your story a 4 out of 5. Losing points for spelling and such, otherwise, I\'m waiting for the next chapter impatiently.
Sincerely,
Michelle W.