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by maja3321

schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was heartbreaking, bleak and completely perfect. Thank you.
person JadedSoul
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very eloquent and poignant piece. I absolutely loved it!
person Lynn
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Lovly dear. So very nice. I shall need to take look to your other works as well.
person Justine
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was an absolutely beautiful story. I don't know how I missed it.

Your interpretation of the war and the feelings of the men in battle were heartbreaking and so real it made my heart ache. Amazing love scene as well.

I really enjoyed this.

Thanks.
person Mal
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was incredibly fine. I enjoyed it supremely. Nice work especially on making the horrors of battle come alive.
person Talene
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rarely do I read slash anymore....bad experience. Not you. The story was very nice...my heart ached for thoth.oth. I wonder if JKR will make things as bleak herself before the sun is allowed to shine as it were. Single chapter story? Don\'t stop writing!
person trulymad
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fucking eloquent smut! Some of the best ever. Your story is more than just simple smut though. It reads like a tragic poem. So depressing, hopeless, and gritty--I love it!