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January 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed reading all of this fic in one sitting. Needless to say, I am anxious to read the next chapter. Very good duality of roles in Hermione. You write all of Snape's reactions in a very convincing manner. Interesting twists involving Harry and Sirius' characters. Please continue soon.
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January 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is beautifully written, I love it. I've read a few other stories with similar plots at other archives but none have been so convincingly written. The way you portay Hermione's emotions and the turmoil inside is excellent. I was given the link to this archive by a friend and started to read this story, I haven't been able to put it down. Well, maybe that's not quite the right phrase, but I'm sure you get the gist. I hope you write more soon, I'll definately be checking to find out what happens.