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I don't know f this is the end, but I would like to congradualate you on a story well done! Wow, this story deserves a spot on "The best Harry Potter Fanfiction of all time", near Riley, and all the other fanfiction greats like cassandra claire. This story was a beautiful masterpeice.

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I am currently on the edge of my seat wondering how things aring ing to turn out!!!! Please don't make us wait too long for the next installment of this brilliant story.

This is so sad! Poor Severus, I really feel for him. The way you've writtien this expresses eons ons so well. I was nearly crying as I read these last few chapters. Please let this have a happy ending. I'll keep my fingers crossed.

Excellent story, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. By the way, who is the author of the beautiful poem you used in chapter 10?

Please, please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE write some more of this wonderful story soon! I love it, it is one of the best HG/SS fics I have ever read. The writing style is superb, the plot is well though out and there is a nice dose of smut too! What more could a fanfic reader ask for??? *big thumbs up for The Fortress Within*

No! No, no, no, no. no! I suddenly don't care about real life, real life smells. Real life means no more story and we don't get to find out what happens to Hermione and Severus! Pleh. Jenny wants more. Soon? Please!

I must say I have truely enjoyed your story. Everything from Sirius proving to be no better then Lucius (go figure with who might be playing him in the next movie) to Harry and Ron finally getting what they deserve.
Ever since you mentioned the potion in the classroom I have had my fears of what will happen with Hermione, please no don't do it.
I understand how real life can get in the way and I anxiously await for you to to return to Sevie-verse (better than Potter-verse). Keep up the excellent work and I will definatly be checking back now and then for updates.

BB,

I just stumbeled across your story for the forst time today, and read all 18 chapters in one shot. My butt fell asleep around the fourth, but it was worth it. I can't wait for the next chapter! Just so you know, you need to work on when and where you put commas and question marks.

Another great chapter. I was glad to read the battle scene. When you say it's not the end. Will there be a resolution between Severus and Hermione, I wonder? You know we all hope so. Can't wait for your next chapter.

Nice twist with Hermione's revenge on Sirius via Lucius. I anxiously await your next chapter.