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August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story! I loved it. It had everything. Romance, action, angist, sadness. Everything! You are so very talented. You are also very passionate in your writing. keep up all of your talented writing.
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July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really k yok your story is very good;... it\'s very long, but very good indeed.
A side never explored by fanfiction authors...
great job.
A side never explored by fanfiction authors...
great job.
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May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so beautiful..
I was brought to tears more than once during this one..
It was so elaborate and well thought out..intricate details and such make writing good writing. The balance between dispair and happiness made their relationship so real..it wasn\'t all sex and romance and glee like some stories are.
I enjoyed your story very much..Snape and Hermione being my favorite couple, I search for stories featuring them all the time. I\'m happy that I found yours!
Thanks for writing it. You\'ve brought me happiness, lol.
I was brought to tears more than once during this one..
It was so elaborate and well thought out..intricate details and such make writing good writing. The balance between dispair and happiness made their relationship so real..it wasn\'t all sex and romance and glee like some stories are.
I enjoyed your story very much..Snape and Hermione being my favorite couple, I search for stories featuring them all the time. I\'m happy that I found yours!
Thanks for writing it. You\'ve brought me happiness, lol.
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May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was one of the best fanfics I\'d ever read, up until Hermione got pregnant. The very idea of pregnancy repulses me and to see it inflicted on Hermione is absoly dly disgusting, not to mention it seems like a cheap escape into cliche, as if you couldn\'t think of what to do next.
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March 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!!!!!! This was absolutly awesome!
Kat
Kat
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February 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for such a wonderful story, I really loved it. I hope that you will consider writing another story sometime soon, you have a real talent. Congratulations and keep up the good work.
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February 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this when it was just on it's 3rd chapter. It's come so far in such a short time. It's truly amazing. The only thing I'm curious is why the first sentence repeats itself twice in the chapters. I know it sounds completely silly, but I can't help but ask. Anyways, boy does birth really does sound horrible. Now I know I really don't want a child. Okay okay, I'm straying off the topic. All I really wanted to say is that I really enjoyed it. You are a wonderful writer and a real crowd pleaser. I wish you the best.
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January 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Cries* That was sooo beautiful. In all seriousness, have you ever tried to get anything published? I think that you really could. If you could think up a plot for an original piece you could get it published! You write really well and convincingly. This story is really moving and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I'll definately be looking out for any more of your work *Hint hint hint* :D
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January 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wonderful i am really enjoying the story. nice to see snape as a family man makes a change to see him in that light.
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January 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHH,, there has to be more to this!!!I love this story and was wandering if you could possibly e-mail me at changjessica2x5@yahoo.com when you put out more.I understand completely if this is an inconveniennd hnd hope to here from you soon.If not I will just check back and look for the updates periodically.
Again this is a great story and I hope that you continue AND SOON!!!!
ja ne ,
Jessica Chang
Again this is a great story and I hope that you continue AND SOON!!!!
ja ne ,
Jessica Chang