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person charzy
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks for fixing the formating, agian a wonderful chapter. and YES!!! an update group would be great, save me from checking every day like I normaly do ;)
person tosca
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I love your take on the twins and Harry\'s reactions to Draco\'s predicament. Looking forward to everyone else\'s reaction to the \'engagement\'. [grin]
person the zedmeister
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm... I love your Harry. I\'m a huge fan of dominant!Harry, and yours is so in control of things... :D ow, ow, an actual plot question: will changing the ritual mean that Draco will be able to access the collected power, or will that still be limited to Harry?
person Greenie
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Chris, it\'s me! Great story!
person Jolene
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the absolutely best stories! Well written, good plot, believable, unique style. I know good work like this takes time but it is hard to wait for each new chapter. I love Harry\'s additude, he\'s maturing with an edge. Draco\'s self preservation as his main motive fits but he\'s always wanting Harry\'s attention isn\'t he. Anyway, very good and can\'t wait for more.
person charzy
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! I like how Harry didn
person Angel # 4
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning. I like it alot. Keep it up, it shows promise:) i\'ll try to reveiw after every chapter.

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person sak
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is still a well-thought out and enjoyable story. I do enjoy the nicknames (and the revival of Umbridge\'s pen). I look forward to more!
person WITCHWERE
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this. I hope you update soon.
person charzy
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story! The switching point of views and going form letters to real conversations are a little confusing BUT I also think it ads to the charm of the story. Please more soon