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person theoddguy
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoW!!Im loving this fic.I have read it twice now,and it gets better for me each time.;) I cant wait to read more soon.
person Lauren
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'ve never written a review for a story before, but something about this one just ired red me to get off my lazy ass and put into words how good I thought it was. I did notice, however, that it hasn\'t been updated for awhile. I hope it\'s not dead...
If it is, I need to know where to send a memorial bouquet.
That being said, the story is great. :)
(And if you ever need an extra hand at proofreading, I\'m an extremely bored English major. *shameless self-promotion in attempt to read more of the story*)
person Becky
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First i would like to say sorry for reveiwing after every chapter but once i started reading i just could sto stop till i got to this point. There with that out of the way i can say that i have found your story intriuging, i have found myself confused more than once but that has not diminished my enjoyment one bit. I hope that the rest of your work will live up to this promising start and i eargely await your next chapter. Much love and encouragement Becky XXXXX
person Ash
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy mother of God. This is an incredible fic that I can\'t WAIT for you to update. There are no words to say how much I have enjoyed reading this... and it\'s taken me a better part of the day. Kudos on a fabulous storyline, incredible \"voices\" for each character, and a consideration for what is \"in character\". I love it.
person liljademoon
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Questions! Is that the end of book one or is there more coming? If it is the end, when\'s Two coming out?
I absolutely loved the story, and the angels were hilarious. The interactions between the characters were realist. The whole Draco spying on Harry in the beginning was great, especially with Draco admitting that he knew absolutely nothing about Harry despite trying to make his life a living hell. I loved the fact that Harry was unato dto deal with pure joy and the ways Draco and Snape help him. Great story. Now write more!!!!!!! ^-^
person Triospleasure
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story Hell of a plotline.I got the gag. For those who didn\'t it from a movie. Oh well just become a Alan Rickman fan and you got it baby. I saw what you did with Pansy and it makes sence on one hand ,but on the other Ginny fought for them. In almost every story people write her like she owes Harry. If it wasn\'t for him she would have been dead. True but remember when she was a BIG Harry fan she was only 10 and 11 years old. Ginny matured I\'m not a big fan of hers but even in a sence of fair play to exclude her from the coven and add a stranger after all of their history... Well I wouldn\'t think Harry or Draco were real friends. They couldn\'t be counted on,but they would expect to be able to count on Ginny. But hay its your story kiddo

Do your thing.
Trio
person Maria
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that your story is turning out to be a lot better and more involved then I originally thought. A lot of writers create grandoise names for their stories when in actuality the writing is mediocure at best. I just finished chapter nine, and while doing so I happened to be listening to \"The Gravity of Love\" by Enya, and I must say that the combination got me a little teary-eyed. If you haven\'t heard the song I recommend doing so I think it complements your story.
P.S sorry if some of these words are misspelled. I\'m horrible at spelling but eh, there are worse things...
person amak206
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First off I LOVE your story. I can\'t wait for an update.
Next, please don\'t fall into what I call the \"God Trap\"
What I mean by that is that some authors will write a good story, find there charecters in a situation where they get amazing abilities and with a wave of there hand can defeat any enemy. No drama, no doubt equals a boring story. It\'s much more fun to read about a real charecter in trouble than a happy charecter who is envincible. Out side of that warning great story hope to see it through completion. The twins are fun, i\'ve all had a thing for the twins!! All in all a great story that may even end up riveling the oringinal itself. Oh well, guess we will just have to wait and see ^_^
person Irony
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so i get home from work, (yes, i hno lno life, i work on saturday nights,) and after watching the news, i decide that my time shall be well-spent reading slash. i get onto adultfan and, hooray, Lord of Shadows, blah, Book One...sonanonandsoforth is updated. \"YAY,\" i think. i read the new chapter, and might i interrupt my small story here to say excellent job as usual. you\'re chapters are long, but long in a satisfying way rather than a... long... way. after reading your stupendous new chapter, i decided to go see, out of curiosity, how many reviews you have. i think to myself, \"well, i\'m sure she has hundreds for this story,\" but i see the little number and exclaim (in my head, i\'m not THAT crazy,) (and pardon my language) \"fifty-fucking-four?!\" mind you, it was 54 at the time i looked. which is why, you see, i decided to tell you what a fabulous job you\'re doing.

hoping i was able to entertain you as much as you\'ve entertained me,
irony
person sak
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You always throw in little bits that drive the story forward as well as intrigue the heck out of me. And every time I see this story updated, I cannot wait to read the chapter. I guess I haven\'t paid as close attention to the title as I should because the comment about the Prince of Darkness from the oracle took me aback. I left my address this time (thanks you for your lovely words at Chapter 8). I await more wonderful developments.