rate_review Reviews

Oh My God! I loved the Hat's song! That's the first originally composed song that actually made sense I've ever read. Wow. Way to lay it on them. Guess Old Slyth and Griff had a bit of a thing going, eh? Anyway, loving it so far. ^_^

Miaka Kennyuuki

More!!! More!!! You've got to write more! I adore this story! It's taken me hours to read this and I didn't want to stop!

WoW!!Another great chapter.I love this story.I cant wait to see how Harry and Draco's band comes together.;)I hope you continue w/ this story till its complete.I have seen many good storys abandoned,and I hope this will not be one o them.hehe.
Well anyways,enough of my ramblings.Im looking forward to reading a new chapter soon.;)

the story is good so far. i love it and the combined things you use. of all the beliefs and religions.

I am so happy your beta is back and you are returning to writing this story. The continuing weaving of Wicca/Pagan into the story is wonderful. The part about the Malfoys, the glimpse into some of their history was very well written. I adored how you described Draco's naming. The guitar was also a great plot device for Harry to show his acceptance of Draco's dream and his desire for Harry to be part of it. I hope the Malfoys learn to understand per Draco's wish to the Green Man. Really wonderful, congratulations.

Wow! I just found this. Great story. Love the way you are growing the characters into a team rather than just one character taking over the story. Can't wait for more. Thanks!

Hello there! I have now read up to chapter 13 and I just had to write and tell you what a wonderful job you are doing with this story. The chapter into Harry's mind was so visually creative and unique that it will stay in my memory for a long time including when I start reading Ms. Rowling's next book. I think you captured the mental instablilty that Harry is facing in Canon and incorporated into your story. I also liked the inclusion on the Angels and the research that you have done to make them as believable as they are. I look forward to your next chapters and best of luck on your future stories.

I was going to wait and finish all of the chapters you have up to review-
but i couldnt' help myself-
I so so so love this story- and your Harry is just what I've been looking for- not "dead inside" and hateful,
but still our good, brave, hero, dealing with his darkness and guilt..
and I love seeing him in love-
you do it so well- the boys make me all warm and tingly, and it's not overdone.
but best of all are the book excerpts-
the voice is just amazing there-
and that retrospective commentary hits you just right-
the detail of the ritual, the politics in the school, the careful work on the secondary cast (and it works so well
to focus on them equally, instead of only on the boys)
must rush off to read more; this is wonderful wonderful-

Very good chapter. I kind of want to see if Draco parents turn there back on the dark lord.

Well, let me first say...WOW!!!! This is wonderful! Just so entrancing. I couldn\'t stop reading it. I hope you continue ,I can\'t wait to see what you have in store! ciao