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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, if just finished the last chapter. It was good and interesting, eventhough I\'m a bit sad it finished so early, I was hoping to see a bit more of Voldemort at the end, but I suppose we \'ll see it next book, won\'t we? I really hope you start the new book soon becuse I\'ll be waiting the update!!!
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just finished reading chapter 9, the one about the bonding ritual. Very beautiful, specially the moment of Sirius and Remus goodbye. So moving... I like the rithim of the story, you go neither to fast or to slow, just perfect, I thought this ritual would be much later in the story...I\'m glad. Ok, I\'m going back to reading now...
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m reading our story and I haven\'t finished yet, so I\'ll tell you more later, but now I just had to gave you my congratulations for such a good chapter. I love your descripcion of Harry\'s mind, it was an incredibly good job!!!!! Very well done!!!! Really, original and well told. I\'m very impressed!
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished this story and WOW is all i really have to say. as i said in my other review(spelling and grammar only \"complaint\") the story is beautifully written and engaging. James\' letter was Awesome and of course the mixing of pagan magic/ natural magic and Wizarding magic has been really awesome... also your \'hints\' at Harry being the shadow lord are very well done and easy to spot for an outsider but well concealed for the characters within the tale. I can\'t wait for the sequel.
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March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have just founf the story am not used to reveiwing on adult ficsion. not a fan fiction.net person. i was wounder how I could hear about the second. book i like the story. the inclusion of the good there are a few mistaks or oddities. I tought james letter was at godric hollow. Pagans are not monothesets they have a set god god\'s and goddes.
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
16-17 were both wonderful chapters and i loved how the first book ended and cant wait for the second
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished up to chapter 10. The From: Metatron, On the Nature of Angels and Mortals
was increadibly well written, as is this entire fic thus far...the only \'complaint\' is spelling/grammar error, but the story is excellent. Any way I love the line This is why there is no true monotheism, except among pagans because as a pagan with the view of the divine which you are writing here i am in complete agreement. I will continue readin now, but i wanted to say this here while it was fresh in my mind... i just found your fic today 3-3-05.
was increadibly well written, as is this entire fic thus far...the only \'complaint\' is spelling/grammar error, but the story is excellent. Any way I love the line This is why there is no true monotheism, except among pagans because as a pagan with the view of the divine which you are writing here i am in complete agreement. I will continue readin now, but i wanted to say this here while it was fresh in my mind... i just found your fic today 3-3-05.
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for the sequel! James\' letter had me crying at the end. That was amazing!
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t understand, why does everyone look to Ron for decisions in this chapter? Despite Ron\'s strategic abilities, isn\'t Harry the leader?
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating! I thought that this was an awesome chapter! I loved what you did with Lucius & Narcissa Malfoy. To see such a change for the good in them made me so happy! The healing ritual for Ron was also amazing! That Lucius Malfoy, Bill & Hermione did it together was wonderful to read. Lastly, that letter from James Potter to Snape was very touching. I believe that those words were something that Snape needed to hear for a long time. I look forward to the sequel! Priss