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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have an interesting opening here; I am curious to read more, though I should point out there are a few spelling errors (i.e., should be \"Parselto,\" ,\" not \"Parcel Tongue\").
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Christine,
The beginning of your epic tale shows promise. You have selected an interesting and oril wal way to portray the famous couple\'s beginning. I look forward to reading more, especially the more juicy parts of the pairings and the love affirs associated with them. Do keep writing!
Thank You,
Kevin
The beginning of your epic tale shows promise. You have selected an interesting and oril wal way to portray the famous couple\'s beginning. I look forward to reading more, especially the more juicy parts of the pairings and the love affirs associated with them. Do keep writing!
Thank You,
Kevin