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WOW! I was not bothered by the Ickiness factor rather I was intrigued by it. I am enjoying your story very much and I like the direction it is going. Update soon!

Love, love, love this! You are really good at drawing me into this world. :) Now, what to say, what to say?

I\'m glad you\'re emphasizing Draco\'s cunning, in the books he\'s always portrayed as a sort of two-bit buffoon, which is at odds with the House he\'s in. Thene ene in the goblin\'s office was nicely done, the goblin being able to read Draco\'s ulterior motives through body language was an excellent touch.

Not at all surprised that Dumbledore is already onto the plan. That man knows too much for his owod. od. :P

I\'m enjoying this very much, and now that I\'ve been good and reviewed, dthatthat mean that chapter 3 is coming soon? *bats eyelashes* Please? :P

Stories with dramatic twists--I love them. I cannot wait for more!

I really like this fic so far. your perceptions of Draco and Harry are astounding and i\'ll be interested to see what happens.
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~Legyviel

How very nice. This is a very well writen and mature story so far. You have captured the the Harry Potter I know from fifth book. A lot of stories I read a lot of stories that go over the deep end on the dark, anguished soul that Harry is. This first chapter has the perfect harmony of angst and hope beyond hope. I hope that this doen\'t change. I\"m getting very tired of angst party that people are so fond of writing. On another note like the garden snake touch. It shows that as aas accepted Parseltongue as a part of him self.

This is brillant, more please.

Christine,

The second chapter is great. Thank you for the mention in the A/N. As for the juicy parts I am not anxious, the build up to them is most often the best parts. Hope the muses keep you company. BTW: Very creative way ake ake Draco have the ability for pregnancy and bring Harry and he together.

Anxiously awaiting your next post,
Kevin

Excellent, This Fic is great:) You actually made Draco a true Slytherin. No half baked plan. Covering his broom. Making a suit, the quick note. That is what a slytherin would do. Not the stupid plans JK Rowlings have them do that are sure to get foiled by the ever rash and reckly griffdorks... Draco thought ahead. Draco recognizing his limits and the plans others might be engaged in.

Love Harry throwing the knief. the excerpts from the books are great forshadowing. The thought that everything is not black and white? maybe there is hope for Lucius afterall he seems to love his son. And power so Draco being with Harry should reel him in. Will Harry finally break away from dumbledork? hmm. please update soon

This is an intriguing start to what you set up to be a long storyline. You start with a unique take on the beginning of a new relationship and I cannot wait to see how it develops and affects as much as this first chapter implies. I like the excerpts from the autobiographies interspersed in the text!

I\'m not much on reviews so make it short. I like what you\'ve got so far I\'m waiting pataintly for the next ch keep it going I know you will. to the point LOVE IT SO FAR