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person silverCross
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ll be honest, I started reading this expecting to hate it, not being a huge lover of twinsest and having had many authors claim their works to be \"epics\" to then be sorely disappointed.

I owe you a huge apology. This is definately worthy of the title \"epic\". It\'s very rare that I get as excited about a fic as I am about yours. often when I\'m reading I skim huge paragraphs, simply to get to the end, but in your case I\'ve absorbed every word. I cannot wait for the next chapter, but at the same time I dread this story ever finishing. (I\'ve only ever reacted this way when reading genuine epics such as His Dark Materials or Lord of the Rings)

you truly belong belong up there with the great authors, I hope you write many more fics on this scale. Now update soon, the suspence is killing me!
person Tosca
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations - this is original, vivid and engrossing. Your characterisation is spot on and nicely balanced (none of that ridiculous Ron/Hermione hatred) and you have a nice handle on the effects of Sirius\' death on Harry without going overboard with the angst. You also make good use of all the characters. I\'m enjoying the sly humor and this is definitely one of the best new series I\'ve read for a while. I\'m really looking forward to reading the rest. Thank you for sharing. :-)
person Merrideth
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more please!!!!!!!!

eagerly awaiting update,
merrideth
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting........
Waiting for more
person Sumire
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, all right. . .
Say you were, I don\'t know, Draco Malfoy. . .

LMAO!!!! Trust Draco to be so blatant while still in hiding. The start of their conversation was priceless, as he gave the whole game away. I\'m glad he did though. I was waiting to see how Draco would tell Harry.

The animagus talk is intriguing. What will Draco be? I won\'t try to guess what he\'ll become, but I\'m very curious.

Love, love, love it!!!

More soon, please?
person Shinri
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic. I hope you post a new chapter soon.
person CutMeFREEAndMakeMeFEEL
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Great so far! Looking forward to the rest of it! Need More More More!
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please please continue and update soon and on a raped succession



Merrideth
person Collett72
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I found it difficult to stop myself writing a steady chant of *MORE* with copious amounts of pleading I enjoyed it so much. This mature Draco is wonderful, it is good to see the same maturity spent in trying to get himself to where he wants to be and using his slytherin cunning to get there. The slivers of darkness that keep popping up to fore shadow what is going to happen are delicious and ensure the reader isn\'t going to forget just where this is going. While there are mulitple changes in narrative style they are easy to follow and add so much to the overall story.

Cannot think of anything wrong with the story so please keep up the great work. There is nothing worse than this sort of story started and never completed as the author gets bored and walks away.
person Siriusly Black2
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love the beginnings of this story! The correspondence angle is very interesting to let the characters display their exact thoughts and feelings on the storyline. I\'m looking forward to seeing how Draco wins over Harry (and avoids being AK\'d by Voldie). Nice job and please post soon...I\'m addicted already!!!