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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your story for a while now (about to read chapter 16) and i thought before i got too far along i should comment on your story.
First off let me say that I like that you thought of another way for Voldie to live forever.... no matter how icky it is. I am unsure of the acceptance of Harry however draco i can see of course cause well it's logical is it not ^^ but that aside I came to be fine with it because you are having an 'evil' Harry ... of sorts I understand that you are making him the price of darkness (not evil) and that he played with his knife and such things in the beginning chapters however that.... quirk seems to have vanished and aside from the looming darkness and the chill that follows harry when he is being stoic or is upset I was wondering if you were going to add anything further to it that continues to repeat. Yes i know you have done and completed a lot of this story (if not all of it yet) and that i'm just talking to maybe future fics (which i hope will come) but I think you should keep a flat line with them, though i'm also thinking at this time that maybe draco affects him in some way (mood wise just a duh) that has helped his darker side be more happy... 'Good in the darkness' and all that
Um I like that you are making it like they are telling a story or someone is reading their lives / journals (w/e) that is a new thing that i very much enjoy and you write them well ^^ (luv-muffin LOL awesome)
The Coven(s) and the grand coven are a very interesting thing and i would like to thank you for the great way you've done them -huggles you a lot-
ALSO I love the fact you've made the purebloods pagan it is the first time i've actually read a story where this has happened and it makes a good deal of since to me and now that you've also shown the stones also made stonehenge i'm wondering if you might do something with that and the coven as it is rumored to be a druidic place of worship and such and I place it in one of my stories -blushes-
I cannot wait to see what happens next.... though i do wonder if you will ever explain how Black knew harry and Draco would come to be together since he wrote his will before he died.
anywho i think i'm going to go back to reading now ^^
~eros
OH WAIT NO
I LOVE YOUR DISCLAIMER ITS THE BEST ONE I'VE SEEN IN FOREVER
First off let me say that I like that you thought of another way for Voldie to live forever.... no matter how icky it is. I am unsure of the acceptance of Harry however draco i can see of course cause well it's logical is it not ^^ but that aside I came to be fine with it because you are having an 'evil' Harry ... of sorts I understand that you are making him the price of darkness (not evil) and that he played with his knife and such things in the beginning chapters however that.... quirk seems to have vanished and aside from the looming darkness and the chill that follows harry when he is being stoic or is upset I was wondering if you were going to add anything further to it that continues to repeat. Yes i know you have done and completed a lot of this story (if not all of it yet) and that i'm just talking to maybe future fics (which i hope will come) but I think you should keep a flat line with them, though i'm also thinking at this time that maybe draco affects him in some way (mood wise just a duh) that has helped his darker side be more happy... 'Good in the darkness' and all that
Um I like that you are making it like they are telling a story or someone is reading their lives / journals (w/e) that is a new thing that i very much enjoy and you write them well ^^ (luv-muffin LOL awesome)
The Coven(s) and the grand coven are a very interesting thing and i would like to thank you for the great way you've done them -huggles you a lot-
ALSO I love the fact you've made the purebloods pagan it is the first time i've actually read a story where this has happened and it makes a good deal of since to me and now that you've also shown the stones also made stonehenge i'm wondering if you might do something with that and the coven as it is rumored to be a druidic place of worship and such and I place it in one of my stories -blushes-
I cannot wait to see what happens next.... though i do wonder if you will ever explain how Black knew harry and Draco would come to be together since he wrote his will before he died.
anywho i think i'm going to go back to reading now ^^
~eros
OH WAIT NO
I LOVE YOUR DISCLAIMER ITS THE BEST ONE I'VE SEEN IN FOREVER
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July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it's awesome and very well done
omigod I sound liuke a teacher..lol
Can't wait for the next part/book
omigod I sound liuke a teacher..lol
Can't wait for the next part/book
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aaaaahhh! i read the WHOLE story in two days while here at school. hope the next book comes out soon. this really good! ^_^
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it is a very lovely story.
i would realy like to see this one finished
i have seen alot of stories that i like just abandend
it makes me sad to see good stories forgotten
i would realy like to see this one finished
i have seen alot of stories that i like just abandend
it makes me sad to see good stories forgotten
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Something strange, here. Draco is the one who is capable of bearing children, but Harry is more of a bottom than Draco is? Possible, but not my favourite arrangement. I prefer a more dominant Harry.
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was very sorry to see you bring Abrahamic beliefs into the story. To my mind, most of the wizarding world doesn't care one way or the other about religion, and most of the rest are pagan. Since Christianity persecuted 'witches' for hundreds of years, it doesn't make sense that they'd support those religions. However, I loved... er... the parrot. (Yes, I'm a coward. lol Okay, I'll say it; I loved Fellatio! *grin* )
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've done some rather... odd blendings of beliefs, here. Sorry for my previous accusation. The meetings with the dead were rather touching.
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just...wow. Has to be one of THE best fanfictions I\'ve read. I love your use of mythology and ritual. You have woven a beautiful, complex plot that draws me in. I am amazed. I hope you take your talents to professional, original fiction.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has been a very interesting story so far. I have to admit that I didn\'t always catch the significance of someof what I assume are Christian references, I myself am Wiccan, but the story flowed nevertheless. I hope that the second part of the Arc has been started, I\'m anxious to see what happens next. So please keep writng this. I\'m off to check your profile to see if the next part has been written.
Oh by the way, your date of 1989 is wrong, James Potter died, Oct 31, 1981. So unless he\'s writing from the grave, it\'s a bit off. Harry was born July 31, 1980 and graduated in 1998. Okay I\'ll stop being a Hermione now.
Oh by the way, your date of 1989 is wrong, James Potter died, Oct 31, 1981. So unless he\'s writing from the grave, it\'s a bit off. Harry was born July 31, 1980 and graduated in 1998. Okay I\'ll stop being a Hermione now.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing, I was utterly thrilled by each and every chapter of it. I hope that the second arc is available soon.