rate_review Reviews

I was thinking that this hadn\'t been updated in a while this very morning, so it\'s good to see some more.

It\'s rare to see Hermione / Lucius interacting in a believable way, or in fact a Lucius who isn\'t some caricatured villain with a taste for rape and murder. And surely he must be more than that, even if he is deliciously blond and sneering.

Utterly splendid teaser and set up for a great mystery and adventure with the most unlikely of allies. Adult Hermione is an extremely plausible extrapolation of the canon Hermione... 10 years hence, and Lucius is very, very intriguing. You\'ve captured them well, and have set up the clues for the trail in such a fashion as to leave your audience begging for more. It\'s been a delight to read... I\'ve ignored everyone and read for a couple of hours... and thorou enj enjoyed the beautiful turn of phrase \'spill of moonlight\' among others, as well as the deft and artful descriptors for people, places, and things. Ok, enough gushing... you have work to do...

I\'m so happy you\'ve updated!! Great chapter too; quite some insight in the story, which is very useful! I hope the next update will be sooner! Once again, great story!!

I\'m so glad you have updated! I\'m writing this before I even read chapter 5, I\'m just going back and reading through the first 4 chapters again since it\'s been a while. I also wanted to tell you that you are in my recomended fic list.

Wonderful! I don\'t know how I missed this one when it was first published, but am thoroughly hooked, now.

As always, you\'ve created a masterpiece of precision plotting and thoroughly believable (albeit borrowed) characters. Hurrah for a non-doormat, intelligent Hermione ... and bravo for your truly unique interpretation of Lucius!

I can\'t wait to read more ...

A phantastic start - cannot wait to read more of this!

OMG!!! Thats a story! WOW (funny that Mr. Malfoy used the same word!). You not only created a very very attractive Lucius but also one who had changed a little bit (just enough to be acceptable as a human being but not too much to be not authentic).
And the riddle! WOW! I love such stories (see Golem). They are not only highly entertaining on a high level but also tell a lot about the skills of the author. An ordinary writer can create a wonderful story, but a highly intelligent and educated author can write not only wonderful stories but fics, which are a challenge to the reader, without being boring or too serious!

Wonderful! What a fascinating plot you\'re developing! One gets so tired of the stories in which nothing happens but sex. Anyone who\'s ever seen the diamond knows it\'s a great subject for a story. And Lucius is equally mysterious and alluring. I\'ll look forward to your updates. Thanks!

I was just re-reading chapter 3 yesterday and wishing there were another chapter to read,and here you go.Excellant timing on your part,Ithink.Anyway,this is proving to be very interesting and I can harldy wait for more.

Oh God! What do you do to me with your wonderful stories. And this one is incredible intense. And your description of Malfoy is so erotic and arousing, incredible - what a man! I nearly crawled into the screen.
I also believe in this story you gave Malfoy a chance to live. He is similar to the Malfoy of Azraelgeffens OoD, but there he had to suffer the Dementors kiss and is now horrifying tortured by the evil and pervert Curator. But your Lucius is wonderfully alive, full of good taste, humour, best educated, without sneering (very good!) - well maybe he too changed a little bit and will not go around anymore killing mudbloods and muggles alike.
What a story. This one togetherh Ooh OoD are THE stories, which make me look into your sites twice a day in very excited anticipation of an update.