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for Where Your Loyalties Lie

by tcg

person Potions Mistress
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I discovered this story tonight, and i love it!! But you haven\'t updated recently!! Could you soon?!?!? For me? Please?!?! I love this!!
person Vanessa
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update! Update! Update!!!! before i die of withdrawl!! please! you are so amazingly talented!!! One of the best HG/SS fics i\'ve read!!!!
person Bree
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The story is brilliant! I really hope that you plan on posting more of the story soon. I cannot wait to read what happends!!
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule May 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GASP! He took the potion?! That was _not_ what he was suppose to do! Grr. I hope it doesn\'t work. Can\'t wait for the next update!

Thanks
Karena Elizabeth
person Tater Chip Girl
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hermione used the Lumos Cardia to shield Snape from Voldemort\'s attack, in the process diverting it to herself. The spell cannot remove the Dark Mark - it merely used the Mark as a link through which to strike at Voldemort, since he himself used it to affect Snape.
person Nocturnus
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi:

I have been reading your fic. i find it lovely. Really well written, and with a perfect sense of timing, without rushin the charachters. Wich are, by the way, well build.

Something I dont catch, Teh lumos cardia, meant that she take off the dark mark for him, or just heal him for the current pain?

Regards, from Chile.
person Alanfan
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
At last patience is rewarded, i am so pleased you are carring on with this story,i am interested to see how you develope it.
person Kreija
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keep \'m comming!
person Seraphina
schedule May 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad that you\'ve updated again, this is a wonderful story, great plot and beautifully written. I love your Snape, he is so believable. Thanks for the update, hope to see more soon.
person reader
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, I can\'t wait for you to update! I love that you have given them such a good reason and setting to get together instead of Hermoine chasing Severus.