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for Where Your Loyalties Lie

by tcg

person Nocturnus
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh joy, this story will be finish, that is what I call a good new.Dont forget to anounce your update at WIKTThankhanks.
person em
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is so good! i cant wait until you write the next chapter! can you please email me with the link when you do! i want to see what snape has planed for next lesson!
keep up the great writing!
person nocturnus
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please let the muses inspired you, dont stop writting thisry. ry. PLEASE
person Blackfish
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s been nearly three months! Come on, just one chapter, ONE!!! I\'m dying!!!
person Lily Malfoy
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I rather enjoy this piece of work. I am eager to see the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
person jenbachand
schedule August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL story. I\'m really enjoying it. I\'m very intreagued & will be anxiously awaiting updates.

Jen :)
person Severian Tenebrae
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
TaterChipGirl,
Magnificent job!! I loved it! You have to write more!
Keep up the good work!!
Sincerely,
Severian Tenebrae
person Severo Snape
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Story!!! I could not stop reading it. I love the idea of Severus having to protect her, it is simply marvelous!!!!!! I really like the part when Severus
\"lowers his head into his hands and lets the tears flow freely, and thinks: \"She loves me!\".\" But I think my favourite part was when he lowered Hermione from
the stone wall and thinks: \"My Geminus. My love. I\'m sorry, so sorry for all this. But it has to be done. I can\'t let him take you. I won\'t.\"
I positively love that, it is really magnificent, cool,.... Oh I don\'t know the word!! But you probably get my drift. I would like to know one thing though...well
actually two. Anyway, One: What is a Geminus?? And Two: Who was the woman in the room with Dumbledore when Snape left? Just wanted to ask those
two questions. To put it simply what I thought about this Fan Fiction,story, I LOVED IT!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sincerely,
Severo Snape


person Eternal Queen
schedule July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
beautiful story. there is so much potential for greatness. please continue quickly. and, if possible, let me know when the next chapter is up.
person Zee
schedule June 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Am loving this

Please update - NOW!