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for Where Your Loyalties Lie

by tcg

person ginn
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m just waiting for her to go \"errm,...Hi?\"
that\'s a cliffhanger if i\'ve ever seen one wow do keep going I think I\'d snap if I didn\'t findout what happens soon
I love your stories ;)
ciao
person Teresa Jacobson
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very good! I hope you are actively updating this story! I will be checking back later to see. :)
person Severo Snape
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHEM!!!! UPDATE! WE ARE DYING FOR ONE!! PLEASE!!!!!!
Sincerely,
Severo Snape
person Mousey
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sooo good. I like the storyline, and the premise. I was slightly disturbed that Snape falls in love with a girl in, like, her third year, but whatever. He hasn\'t acted on it until her sixth... Your grammar is good, and so is your spelling. There is the occasional mistake, but that is to be eted.ted. I would greatly appreciate it if you would write some more... That was an evil cliffhanger at the end! :)
--Mousey
person Nocturnus
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Severo Snape
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
TaterChipGirl,
Ohmygodess! I love your fanfic! You put a cliffhanger in Chapt. 10, wait let me rephrase that, you MADE Chapt. 10 in to a cliffhanger. You are evil! LOL!
No I am kidding!
You MUST update extremely soon! Let me know if I can help! For I would love to! Keep up the damn good work!
Sincerely,
Severo Snape January 30, 2004
alanrickmanseverussnape@yahoo.com
person amanda
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, I so cannot wait for the next chapter. Oh...yay you. Great story!
amanda
person Julie
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! Chapter 10 is finally her I a I am so hooked on your story! I love it when she knocked him off of his chair! Please keep going! This is so great!
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She did it! She apparated!
The next chapter should be great fun. Will the sexual tension break? Or will they continue suppressing it? (Fun, fun)
Write more soon please.
person MsPixie
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. That\'s all that really descibes this fic.
I enjoyed storstory line very much, reading all the chapters in one go until my eyes were watering.
Did I mention EXCELLENT ??!!
I simply can\'t wait to see on where you\'ll be taking this. Especially on the little situation you left us hanging with in the last chapter.
But, I will wait patiently. You have one more very addicted reader now! :)
Love&Respect
MP