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for Where Your Loyalties Lie

by tcg

person KarenDetroit
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I hope life comes back into your comfort zone so you can devote some time and energy to completing it. I find it all compelling.
person Rainny
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeeeh! Finally you have updated! That was a great chapter. Please update again sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon!
I imagine Snape would have a really hard time with controlling his feeling now that the Geminus thing has taken its affect. I'll wait and see.
Thanks for update :-)

*BIG KISS* Rainny
person Rainny
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good Luck!
person A. Clearwater
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good FF so far. I love the Ron/Harry pairing, especially since no one said the Germinus had to be a male/female relationship! Can't wait for the next chapter and to see some real smut!
person Fictionlover_32
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting for your updates for month and months and months! But, it was worth the wait! Did you by any chance upated for ff.net also? I tried to look for your story there, but for some reason, it wasn't there. Personaly, I d wan want to read it at ff.net because they won't allow you to post NC-17 rated stories, and aff.net had so many badnwidths, it's a miracle I got to read your chapters at all, not to mention, they don't allow you to choose your text sizes. I know you're quite busy, but would you consider posting your chapters on Ashwinder? They have a high standard for posting, but lot of my friends post it over there, and it makes me easier to read any stories on that site. Please let me know what you think. Cheers! Shin
person never_tempt
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU !!! I've been waiting for the update! I just wish Hermione would find out what it is and have Sev finally confess before Voldemort finds them! I also hope Harry and Ron can settle things, so Ron won't feel unworthy. (I don't usually like Ronniekins, but if he's really there for Harry who am i to argue?) Please don't keep us waiting so long. I get impatient.
person Rainny
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* That is why you never post a tiny bit of thing.
I love your fic and here I said it maybe a million times but still I want you to know.
Hope you get over that writer block sooon. Wish you the best luck in the world.

Keep going please...

Rainny
person RSYL
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I forgive you! I do! When I first click on the story link and see Chapter 11 my heart was ponding like hell and I jumped like Dobby but Chapter 11 turns out to be Author's note. I won't say I'm not disappointed but at least there is still hopen ken knowing you don't abandon the fic, right?
Please tell us you don't abandon us. I will wait for you to finish the chapter and Oh don't tell me it is the last chapter. It wouldn't make sense if it was. There's still a lot of plot out there.
About beta, why don't you get one? It would be helping a lot. You don't have to show them the full story if you don't want. They could suggest some idea or anything you are not sure. Like about writing lemon etc.
Lastly I wish you good luck and get well soon from your terrible writer block.

Thank you for inform us.

RSYL
person Music
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im so sorry that you are suffering from the PLAGUE. Hope you get better soon. (Oh, if you need beta help drop a line.)
person Severo Snape aka Severian Tenebrae
schedule August 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THANK MERLIN! I thought you had abandoned us or died or something! It is good to have some news, I forgive you, no problem. If you need a beta, I would be honoured ot be your beta. If your interested email me:

severussnape@moonshinehollow.com

I hope your terrible writer\'s block goes away!

Sincerely,
Severo Phoenix Snape August 9, 2004