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for Where Your Loyalties Lie

by tcg

person AlphaRyoko
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!

I feel like Crabbe and Goyle at an all-you-can-eat buffet ...

No, wait, like the Weasley twins trapped in the girls\' dorm during a pillow fight ...

Ah! This story is great! I can\'t get enough!!!

Wonderful!
person Lori
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! They are so close now to spilling it. I can\'t wait for more!
person JJ BattleX
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WoW this story rulez! I really wanna know what happens next so keep it comming.
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh this is excellent! Great idea, and wonderful tension between the two of them! I can\'t wait to see how he snaps when they finally kiss!

Thanks, Please update soon!
Karena Elizabeth
person Laerai
schedule May 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
VERY very well written. Your words let me know exactly what is going on, exactly what is happening, what they are feeling, as if I could almost feel it myself. You worked the spells and situations well into the original storyline! You\'re awesome TaterChipGirl!
person Candace
schedule April 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I\'ve just finished reading the chapters you\'ve posted so far and have to say that this is one of the best SS/HG stories I\'ve read. I very much hope you\'re planning on continuing with it because I can\'t wait to see what happens next! I\'m a little concerned \'cause you haven\'t updated in a while. Keep up the wonderful writing!!!
person alanfan
schedule February 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just been reading this again and loved it I do hope there is more, it will be interesting to see where you take it.
person alanfan
schedule February 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good story i hope there will be more chapters enjoyed what you've done so far
person Sun-chan
schedule January 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so closee.. Hemione almost admitted she loved him!
This so good!
Can't wait to read next chapter, Severus geting drunk? Sounds like fun! Lol
person jenn
schedule January 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very original, i have to admit. i like the spells youve come up with and how it all ties in with harry potter, even if he is a minor character as he should be in these fics. i thoroughly enjoyed it, and i for one cant wait to find out what snape is like when hes wasted.