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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo! I love your beginning. : ) You managed a unique one. lol Not an easy task with so many responses to this challenge. I eagerly await seeing where you take this story.
Kiri
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. Great start! I really love the Marriage Challenge. It\'s one of the best (kuddos to ChelleyBean for coming up with it!) out there, and your take on it sounds very promising! Can\'t wait to read more about the upcoming dates. I also really liked the way you handled the talk between Hermione and Snape. He wasn\'t all lovey dovey, nor was he too cruel. Great balance:) Cheerio, Tesa.
P.S. I LOVE the name Rosemond Green. It\'s so sensual! lol.
P.S. I LOVE the name Rosemond Green. It\'s so sensual! lol.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Severus is already extremely sexy, and the story is building up to be very intriguing - despite being a challenge plot and having been done a million times before! :) Keep up the good work and please update soon!
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey great start to this challenge. I have read alot of the responses to this challenge and I must say the way you did this one is unique. Usually it is Dumbledore telling Mione to marry Snape. I like how you twisted it and made it Draco. Please update this often. I am really enjoying it.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting take on the Marriage Law challenge. I\'m really looking forward to seeing where you take this story!
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was a good twist to the story and I love it. great frist two chapters can\'t wait to see what happens nest........... keep up the great work
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*happy sigh*
Gotta say, I love this challenge. ;) Nice beginning and I\'m looking forward to more.
Gotta say, I love this challenge. ;) Nice beginning and I\'m looking forward to more.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, i like it. i like it alot. please update.
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done! You were right that this is a bit of a different take on the challenge. I hope that Chapter 3 and the rest will not be long in coming. Oh...nice job on the cute Draco. And the Rose Green character is sweet too. Poor Hermione. Can\'t wait to see what she loves about the dear Professor. ;-)
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous beginning....I can\'t wait to read what happens next.