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Nice job of escalating the tension, and adding to her confusion. After all, everything can\'t be all hearts and flowers immediately. There has to be *some* opposition. Bravo Lucius! But my heart went out to Draco. Tough spot to be in.

nice long ch. im dying to know wuts wrong w/lupin and who hermione is going to choose. im begging u to please update soon!

This is a great story. I would have never thought to make Draco so adorable and yet not a threat. He is very yummy! I love snape above all and can\'t wait to see how he & hermione learn to be together. I can\'t wait.


Please update soon!

Ooh, great twist! It makes perfect sense that Draco would be forced to hurt Rose, but I *really* didn\'t see it coming. I love the way you\'ve portrayed Draco here. I was a little ambivalent about Rose getting hurt ar first (I like Hermione having another decent option, so she can choose Snape for interesting character reasons rather than plot ones.), but you changed my mind t awt away when you used it to develop Draco\'s character. Good work :)

One detail you may want to fix--Remus *has* met another werewolf. In OotP, when Arthur is recovering at St Mungo\'s, the man in the bed next to him has just been bitten by a werewolf, and when Remus visits with Harry and the Weasleys, Harry notices him go to the other bed and \"speak softly\" to the new werewolf. It doesn\'t mean he knows anything at all about werewolf diseases, though, so your plot\'s still fine; it\'s just that one line that needs a change.

Thanks for a great read!

wow wonderful wonderful chappy........................ still wondering who she is going to pick.............................. and as all ways keep up with the excellent work

Who will she choose?! (As if I didn\'t already know) I can\'t wait to find out what happens next. Update soon!

Tiffany

This story is going great and I love your writing style. Can\'t wait for Herm to make her choice (Sev of course) and the after effects :)

Not feeling well today, so I will keep it brief......I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!! Really great plot building chappie!! LOVED IT!

Well, that was a surprise, poor Draco. I guess Hermione is reconsidering choosing Rose especially after this. Will Sev ever be at peace? Whats going ith ith Lupin? I know if you answered that would defeat the purpose of the story so please post soon.

elementaldeity

I love this story. Eagerly waiting for more tes.tes.