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February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~~~OMG~~~ YOu have to write more so soon I just started reading and i am waiting on more this is a great FanFic and i will be waiting for more so HURRY UPP this is great!!!
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, what a lovely story! Please post updates on WIKKT--I am truly hooked now! (And Ron was good and accurate comic relief about what men do after a hearty snog, snicker).
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More amazing chapters! I really love your story. Glad to see it also posted on Lord and Lady Snape! I usually check that site first for updates and then go to adultfan. Keep the chapters coming!
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t remember if I\'ve reviewed this story previously or not (and I\'m too lazy to run through the reviews to check) but I just wanted to let you know that I think you\'re doing a wonderful job on the story. Snape is portrayed as being vulnerable without making him seem too mushy and Hermione sounds as if she\'s learning a few of life\'s harder lessons with a certain amount of grace and style. I like the way that you have portrayed her as a confused teen without overdramatizing the fact as I doubt she would be a character that would fly off the handle into hysterics. Great job and I EAGERLY await your updates.
~Jules
~Jules
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10... What a GREAT chapter, so much hningning!!! I LOVE the situation with Severus & Remus!!! The mother hen bit was PERFECT!!! I hope that Severus will be able to help him!!! I also like the bit at the table & the line from Ron, TOO FUNNY!!! I think you put in a nice amount of humor to balance out this chapter perfectly!!!
Poor Rose, poor Draco!!! I feel so bad for Draco beput put in this position by his (_!_) of a father!!! I am glad that Hermione got him to understand that it was an accident & that she wanted him in her life!!!
After what has happened I hope that Hermione\'s choice will be a bit easier to make!!! If she can\'t tell that Severus is her best choice now she isn\'t using that brain in her head!!! Lucius is Lucius & if he wants something he won\'t stop trying to get it any time soon!!!
Can\'t wait for more!!! Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^<
P.S., I think this is the 1st time that I have ever read about someone actually eating one of Albus\' lemon drops;-)
Poor Rose, poor Draco!!! I feel so bad for Draco beput put in this position by his (_!_) of a father!!! I am glad that Hermione got him to understand that it was an accident & that she wanted him in her life!!!
After what has happened I hope that Hermione\'s choice will be a bit easier to make!!! If she can\'t tell that Severus is her best choice now she isn\'t using that brain in her head!!! Lucius is Lucius & if he wants something he won\'t stop trying to get it any time soon!!!
Can\'t wait for more!!! Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^<
P.S., I think this is the 1st time that I have ever read about someone actually eating one of Albus\' lemon drops;-)
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know who my heart goes out to more...Hermione, for being thrust into this situation, Draco, for having to live his life the way he has to, Rose for being unknowingly stuck in the mi of of a madman\'s plans, or Severus, for not being able to stand on top of the Astronomy Tower and yell that he cares for Hermione. (Reminds me of that jewelry commercial-Ben Bridge, I think- where the man takes his-wife? girlfriend?-to the center of a quad and yells at the top of his lungs, \"I LOVE THIS WOMAN!\" and gives her a ring, and she hugs him whispering,\"I love this man, I love him, I love him, I love him...\" Okay. So I\'m sappy at times, but that\'s poo poor Severus needs. He needs to be able to be blissfully in love, poor guy. And poor Hermione! The focus of a crazy man\'s evil idea. I\'m done jabbering now. Anyways, great as always! Update soon!
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oops! I forgot to tell you how much I like the fact you you are giving Hermione TIME! I\'ve seen (read?) soo many stories where she finds out about the law, finds out who has petitioned for her, and Boom! She goes with Severus, on the spot. (Not that that isn\'t the most logical choice given the situations, mind you.) You are giving her time to make such a huge decision. And giving her more than one option, too. Yeay for you. :-D
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am a chappy behind in my reviews. Cer 9er 9, oh my, she is breaking Snapes\' heart.
I hope to see more of Rose as a point of conflict. But I know she doesn\'t have much time to choose. What about the picture book she now has?
I really hope to see more evil Lucius Malfoy.
Really enjoying this take on the marrilaw law challenge and your OC of Rose.
I hope to see more of Rose as a point of conflict. But I know she doesn\'t have much time to choose. What about the picture book she now has?
I really hope to see more evil Lucius Malfoy.
Really enjoying this take on the marrilaw law challenge and your OC of Rose.
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what a tease you are... don\'t change
i love severus so if hermione doesn\'t want him, can i have him? pretty please?! =^_________^= i\'ll give you my *coughstupidcough* dog in exchange!
i love severus so if hermione doesn\'t want him, can i have him? pretty please?! =^_________^= i\'ll give you my *coughstupidcough* dog in exchange!
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! The tensionmounmounting nicely! I\'m eager for the next chapter and I\'m curious to know what you have in store for Remus. Very good chapter!
Ciao ^_^
Ciao ^_^