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for The Rules of Engagement

by GlindaTrisstt

person LadyFlashB
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter! Gods, I don\'t know if I can take any more angst, my heart is weary... *sigh* Wonderful chapter, by the way...! Not quite a \'death-sentence\' in my eyes; \'course I\'m not Hermione. Oh. Perfect, I love the way you are drawing it out, the tale is filled with an abundance of depth. Please update soon!
person Halcyon
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know this is a ss/hg challenge response, but you had me sweating right up unto the end about her choice! Very well done that it wasn\'t an obvious decision, and a nice job on the bit of the Severus\' backstory you revealed. Can\'t wait to read more!
person Sally
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your story! Can\'t wait to see a new update notice in the WIKTT e-mail.
person carmen
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
meeeeeeeppppp!!!!!! OMG! she chose severus....wow. im dying to know where this\'ll lead! please update asap!
person GeekGoddess
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well thats a relief....somehow...it feels as if it was pity that made her choose Severus.....also the risk of something else happening to Rose.....kind of sad....I hope it gets happier soon.
person Anon
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im happy that she chose snape but there are so many buts to be considered.

She is choosing him for the wrong reasons.....or maybe she isnt but that is what it seems like to me.

She doesnt love him or even really like him in that way....she just chose him because he can protect her and rose wont be in any danger, then will he.

i a g a great story.

But i wont be reading it any more because she is just using him. And i really hate her for that.
person Moaning Myrtle
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so much pain for our poor Potions Master and yet ~ a happy (?) surprise. Can\'t wait to read more of Aubrey, what\'s up with Lupin and how Severus reacts to Hermione\'s unexpected decision (I guess he didn\'t see the rules of the challenge...lol).
person Angie
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been keeping up with this story, I like it very much. Lovee Wue Wubby part. As per your request, I saw the update over at Yahoo. Talking about updates.....hint, hint. :)
person yncarn8
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I\'d drop you a line to let you know I am thoroughly enjoyng this story and look forward to your updates.

I do have one small point to make - Aubrey is an unusual name for a girl, it is a boys name and means \'ruler\'. But hey you have bloke called Rose so, so what?

Best wishes
carncarn8
person Talene
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have left reviews....you have not noticed it seems. You have a wonderful story here with much intruigue and suspence. I look forward to thet cht chappie.