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for The Rules of Engagement

by GlindaTrisstt

person anon
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Rose isn\'t going to understand Hermione\'s decision. Severus is going to think she is choosing him just to protect Rose. There\'s more to it, right?\"
I agree with deblovesdragon - poor Severus won\'t understand at all, and let\'s be honest, that is the only reason she\'s choosing him right now. And I know I\'m in the minority here, but I don\'t like Rose very much, it seems to me if he did care for Hermione as much as hys hys he does, he would be looking out for her best interests also.
Why do I get the feeling, that for awhile, after Hermione and Severus get married, she will continue to see Rose and break Sev\'s heart?
person frenchgirl
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How can you do such a thing ! Put this evil cliffhanger now is like wanting to torment to no ends your poor readers ! However, as I am addicted to your story, I forgive you hoping the next update will come soon. I love the way you take on the marriage challenge creating a real competition between the suitors of Hermione, choosing Snape in these conditions showing more about the psychology of the characters and making them so much more realistic and credible. So congrats for your story and go on wirh the show !
person IrishRavenX
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Oh.s ris right. I am impatiently hopping on one foot until there is an update!
person mother
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sensible girl. Honestly, this is really good and I look forward to every update.
person pyewacket
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better. I absolutely love it! I like that Hermione and Severus not not jumped into bed already. You have a really great story going! Keep it up!
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awsome chapter! Update again soon!

Tiff
person MissCrystalix
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HUZAAAAAH!!!! (a Renaissance \"Horay!\") AN UPDATE! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! OH NO! HOW IS ROSE GOING TO TAKE IT :-( ....OH WELL, YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY SNAPE!!!!! .....okay, i\'m done now :-)
person Lavinia Savant
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is one of my favorite fan fictions, your pace is quite good and you seem to know what is \'at stake\' in the story. keep up the good work!
person Miki
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! I like the competition you set up and that the opponents were worthy ones. I love that you allowed Hermione to feel different types of attraction. I can\'t wait for the rest. Bring it on, baby!
person Pheebs
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew! ::whips forehead:: i was so scared that it would be rose. I\'m glad at the choice she made. Sev shouldn\'t have to feel like he has been. You made me a very happy person :)
I\'m usually a silent reader. I don\'t review stories much, but i just had to for this chapter. I have read a few of your stories and i love them! You are amazing. I bow down to you. Please don\'t ever stop.