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awesome! I hope you continue soon.. :)

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It's awesome!
I'm very curious to see why Hannah slapped Draco :P

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

~lol~ that was great i love it ... and ron is getting married ... please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

I'm sorry I've been such a bad reader but I had to finish reading up to chapter 30 before I reviewed. Something about reviewing cutting into my reading time ;). The premise of your story is sound and I love the title you've chosen. A title as far as I'm concerned can make or break a story so you chose well.

I'm also happy that you gave Severus a happy childhood (at least for a bit). That's something that I didn't think about before you presented to me. That's what fan fics are all about, presenting the info in a new light.

You seem to have a lot of typos in the story. While I generally am able to read what is there and for the most part have no problem understanding, there were a couple of instances where I really wanted to know what was said and I couldn't figure it out.

Back to praises. I like that Severus does not appear OOC even though he is in love. And I like even more that Hermionie doesn't become a twit at all during the story. Foot-in-mouth disease suffering Ron is just like a friend we all have (or it may be us) and he for me has been your best work. The rest of the characters are good but Ron is all your own.

Finally I've taken a great liking to seeing what is going on in Remus' life. The biting and the nibbling and the sniffing are not only erotic but it adds another dimension to your story.

I love this story and while I'm not asking for you to drag it out I'd REALLY like this to get to maybe 50 chapters (I know, I'm asking you to give up your life here) but this seems like a fic I can read again and again.

Glinda--just reread the whole thing. There's a lot of cleaning up in earlier chapters needed. I could do this if you wanted--just send the stuff to me the way you did Chap 30.

Karen

WOW.. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! IT was great, as always. :)

I was thrilled to see this at the top of the page. More surprises and more wanton-ness!What is going on with the whole "Dora"-Remus-Annya situation? I still can't wait for the bonding!!! Way to go with Rons wedding though, it adds to Remus' tension, it's almost time for Hermione's bonding... Anyway, when is Ginny going to tell Harry? It's killing me! And what's going on at Durmstrang. Does Remus like Annya and she just wants to be friends, or does he not want to admit he likes her so he is pushing her away, or does he not see her as anything more than a mating partner?!? Questions, questions...By the way, out of curiosity, how much longer do you plan on making this fic, if you have any plan? I hope it goes on forever! Update soon please!!!!

You have no idea how happy I am that you've updated! It's been forever, and I had given up hope that this story would ever be finished. I actually screamed in happiness, and I got a few glares for it. :D But I'm too happy to care at this moment, and I hope you're going to update again soon!

*Squee* Welcome back!

Wow, an update, it's like Christmas in the summer! This is by far the best marriage law story around and more realistic. They all have real problems and real flaws, but they find love. The sex scene was fantastic.